Lit.
High
the hot vibes of passion that night.
Wild
that first rapture of love's lit desire.
Unsealed
the lips seduction made breathless.
Eager
those limbs myriad kisses caressed.
Heady
the thirst to breach and bend rules.
Perfect
that feeling of reaching sweet union.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments7
Wow indeed,
this is amazing in its own write and made even more so by the image that accompanies these passionate words throughout, until that most perfect conclusion..... Neville
Your comment shows pleasure having read these few lines of love-words and for this I write a big thank you and more my friend..... x
my pleasure Fay x
What lurks behind the poetic genius whose daily masterpieces leave us trailing in hopeless awe. Well... who knows?.. certainly a lady of many talents and surprises.
What a joyous steamy romp of a blistering sensual love poem you give us today.
I have to say that your piece today gave me a Hieneken moment.... it reached the parts other poems cannot reach.
You are so very generous in your assessment of this humble poet D.A. and my what did the read do to you in experiencing that Hieneken moment my friend - - am smiling at the same time as thanking you muchly for this wonderful comment. My aim is to please and so glad you enjoyed the read.
Swoon! heehee.
Oh - hope you did not swoon too soon Orchi and that you were able to read the piece to its end.
True love is truly love, as portrayed in both the pic and the lit
Many thanks Suresh for seeing the message behind the lines.......... yes true love can bless with all that and more.
Oh gosh - I'm there - that night - what a superb write dear Fay - all I can add is ditto all the previous comments.
Oooh - - being there means you took every word and digested the piece thoroughly - -do hope you recovered enough to eat lunch today Mike........ Blushing with thanks for this encouraging comment and promise tomorrow's will be quiet and proper........... ha ha .
Takes me back to my first girlfriend To this day I am sure I was in love even at 14 Marvellous sentiment really enjoyed mt read thank you
My thanks to you for your visit and read and for sharing this lovely comment.
Super sensual write Fay.
Ah - -- grateful for your visit and comment dear Goldy - - sensual can be written delicately which I hope I have achieved with this little verse.
You certainly have Fay.
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