Only a Dream.

Goldfinch60



Once in a dream I saw it

There before me,

My future life stretched out.

A life of love and peace,

Where all in the world

Showed kindness to each other,

And rancour did not exist.

All loved each other,

Helped each other

Without thinking of themselves,

Where aiding all was the norm.

Once in a dream I saw it,

Saw this wonderful life ahead of me,

But then again,

It was only a dream.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 11th, 2019 01:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: Maybe one day the dream will come true.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 20
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. Yes, I suppose so - a dream, human beings being what and who they are.

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes, only a dream. If only.......

    • Fay Slimm.

      Yes this must be one of the best dreams we can have dear Goldy - keep your loving dream alive.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fay, that dream is always with me.

      • Laura🌻

        Andy,

        A dream of all dreams!
        We can always hope because there’s hope!

        I enjoyed listening to the Everly Brothers!

        My love to Joyce and to you!

        ~Laura~🌻

        • Goldfinch60

          That hope is so important in our lives, maybe one day that hope will come true.

        • Michael Edwards

          A dream in wakefulness is a dream to nurture. Fine write Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true Michael, very true.

          • Neville

            Super sir.. I do so hope your dream will be realised one fine day.... N

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Neville’s, so do I.

              • Neville

                They will sir, just you mark my words............ N

              • moordykspot2

                A fine piece of work my friend. Oh that your particular dream would come to and make the world a better place. I fear a dream it will remain but fine writing like yours which brings peace and enjoyment to your reader. I pinch the phrase "Every Little Helps "

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you mordyspot, if only that dream would com true all would be wonderful.

                • Suresh

                  Dreams are reality in alternative universe - dream on

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Suresh, I will.

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    Thanks UNCLE ANDY : for the EVERLY BROTHERS : they always melt this Girls Heart especially DREAM ! Because BRIAN & I are on the same wavelength : when we are apart "All we have to do is Dream !" BUT in a weeks time we will be "TOGETHER AGAIN" AMEN !
                    Dreams of Peace & Harmony are a BLESSING : Ive had them and so has BRIAN and Martin Luther King ! BRIAN was in the HOUSE of COMMONS (On Education Business) on the DAY OBAMA was inaugurated : He was in the Members TV Room with Tony Ben and others. He told me He asked some of them "Does this mean MLK's Dream will be vindicated" : they said maybe but only partially ! And then 8 years later The USA was TRUMPED by a Spoof President who wants to BLOCK OFF the Mexican Border (2000 miles) and flirts with the KKK ! The Great Late John Lennon had the ANSWER in "Imagine" & "Give Peace a Chance" : BRIAN & I have DREAMS : BUT as Christians we surely know "There will be PEACE in the VALLEY some day : AMEN"
                    Blessing Peace & Joy to Yourself & Joyce
                    LOVE in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

                  • dusk arising

                    And a dream worth having too.



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