Newness.
From cold warmth blows into time again,
from fog appears lighter days,
from inertia zeal gyrates
newness by making
way for tomorrow's feed of regeneration.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Short but hopefully meaningful.
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A fine write Fay.
Good that you thought the write to your taste dear Orchi. Thank you for your visit.
My Dear Fay,
You say, “...hopefully meaningful”...
I say, “...very meaningful”...
Many signs of New Beginnings are beginning to emerge! Such a wonderful feeling!
Thank you for penning and sharing your beautiful thoughts!
~Laura~
My grateful thanks Laura for your thoughts on this small verse - yes new beginnings when we feel and see them are worth an ode or a ballad. Glad you found the read meaningful.
Hot off the press and shining like a beacon to guide both lost and wandering pilgrims to safety in the arms of a new and nourishing season we know as spring.... a little delight for sure... a bit like me lol .... Neville
Dear delight - -(dunno about little !! )- -- a round of appreciation for your perceptive comment on how to assist regeneration Nev.......pilgrims who search get meaningful messages and you seem to have got the gist of celebrating a newness for which I send big thank yous and more......... Fay
That will do nicely Fay.. very nicely indeed.... oh' and my pleasure of course.. N
The promise of a new beginning and the signs are now everywhere.
Yes finding signs everywhere a poet cannot help but celebrate beginnings - thank you for dropping by and for the comment dear Michael.
Being able to provoke thought is a gift and talent. You have both in your writing. A real pleasure to be able to read your work. I look forward to it. Thank you
You honour my writing and am both grateful and really delighted - so pleased you like what you read and hope I will please you with some more of my efforts.
Regeneration, a product of the cold, preparing for a chance to blossom again.
Feel the Spring again and again
Thank you kindly for summing up the signs of newness Suresh - - tis a good time of year when everything bursts with such fervour.
May that regeneration bring that peace, joy and love to us all.
Sincere thanks for these wise words Goldy.
Yes indeed, I mean, look what happened to the dinosaurs.
Exactly D.A. - - personally I would be over the moon to see them regenerated but then that is me...... not all would agree.
HI FAY : Love the picture FAY : Newness of Life in the grass green leaves & Newness of Love in a fingertip touch ! Brian is still on his Field Trip on Coastal Erosion : the Norfolk Council put up nets to prevent erosion and the RSPB made them take it down because it blocked the nesting sites for the Terns !
I have spent most of my 30 Springs in the UK and the UK S[pring can be very tantilising especially when Brian is growing Veggies and trying to beat the Frost ! Some days like WINTER : Some like SUMMER & Some even like SPRING ! : Flowers in the Meadow BUT it is all part of Tomorrows REGENERATION !
Leaves & Blossom on the Trees : Wild Flowers in the Meadow and Chicks & Lambs & Calves & Foals all proving that in the natural Annual Cycle : Summer & Harvest & Winter & Springtime will never cease ! Thanks for sharing & caring about Nature & All of US !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
What a delightful summary of the newness piece dear Angela - -- and the news about Brian trying to sort out what is happening to prevent erosion on endangered coastlines -- there are so many issues to consider and it must be frustrating for all............... thinking you both as Easter draws near and brings your break together ever closer........... thank you for the visit and lovely comment.
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