La Petit Mort
Gasp pant sigh
Moan heave flinch
Take note of each of these
Involuntary contractions
Each a separate convulsion
An inseparable ache sublime
Then concentrate on pelvic thrust
Note the ricochet of rib on hip
And for a moment
When each of us is overcome
Sail or glide into temporary oblivion
Then when there is no more breath left to take away
La petit mort
They say
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Life is too short.. if it feels good, then go for it... N
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Outstanding! I've read it a few times now and every time I feel a bit more grounded as I'm losing the plot this morning!
Thank you in so many ways
You are far too kind this fair mane, but I like it and feel compelled to say a big thank you sir.. N
A fantastic exposure of la petit mort Nev. and in such delicate language - a most sensuous read of which I take note....... must read it again so most breathlessly saved................
I call that a win win then...... thank you ever so my friend.... N
My pleasure as always Nev. - - -- agreed that what feels good is good when years teem with excess of pale dreams....... great read .....x
How bloomin write you are Fay .... N x
Oohh, should I try this?! Fido don't let me have any excitement, so if it's that category…..
If you have anything that comes close to an excitement orchidee, remember .. tis the purple pills... we call em anti-excitement pills in the trade... N .......... 🙂
What wakes me from le petit mort... are we talking the flare or the afterglow..... the blissful afterglow for me..... do not wake me, do not disturb...let no doorbell sound... no amazon delivery of crayons for the grandchilds birthday demand my arising...no. Leave me in bliss....
See what you do? ... you're dangerous you are...
I used to be.. now I just dabble.... cheers DA.... N
Such enevitability, with such ease implored.
thank you.... Neville
Lovely erotic piece, I've always loved the term 'la petit mort'
Thank you so very much Seren my friend..
Yes, it is a rather lovely term and I sincerely hope throughout your journeying, that you are blessed with many of them ..... Neville
I'm just recovering from one - fine write N
serves ya write.... go have a lay down till ts time for the next round..... Cheers tho..
Great sensuous poem Neville.
sensuous does it for me every time... bless you GF60... N
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