finale

dusk arising



for you i wrote from my heart
for your eyes i let it all pour out
a gift from me to you
you could have asked me when things were said
but you gave away my words instead
to the wrong person

unforgivable

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2019 00:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: something i wrote and published couple of years back, re=published here, to help thru my dry spell
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
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  • Goldfinch60

    Very emotive write d a.

    • dusk arising

      Yes, and a very disappointing occasion it relates to.

    • Michael Edwards

      A bit of an emotion tugger - hope your dry period gets wet soon.

      • dusk arising

        Still dry, digging up oldies. Emotional tugs are something single poets experience profoundly i guess.

      • orchidee

        A sensitive write dusk.

        • dusk arising

          Thats just the kind of rock 'n roll guy i am i suppose.

        • Neville

          It happens & it hurts like hell, so they tell me...... unforgivable maybe, but nevertheless enjoyed, if ya get my drift..... Neville

          • dusk arising

            All a part of lifes rich tapestry which makes us poets the thing we are..

            • Neville

              absolutely.........................

            • Suresh

              What we think is ours
              It seldom is
              Breakups leave one, in
              pain, instead of bliss

              Glad it was in the past

              • dusk arising

                Hmm, i never try to posess but something personal given from the heart is, one hopes, to be treated as personal.
                Long ago now and just another scratch on the armour.



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