Watching

Neville

‘Watching’

 

Here midst the shadowed blue and purple hues

I watched a lady untie her shoes

 

And

 

Then I hasten to confess I waited till she

Removed her dress

 

Then

 

Standing naked in the foyer

I felt not the slightest bit a voyeur

 

But

 

Rather more a manipulated victim of her

Superior experience and eloquence

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2019 03:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: If anyone suggests I need to tick the mature box... get a life
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  • orchidee

    Should Fido bark?! He's a pest. That is his life, or a main part of it - barking at certain poems. And when did he learn to read?! And -- should I meet her?

    • Neville

      ... I suggest you muzzle up, then huddle up, but only if she lets ya...

      • orchidee

        Will she let me, do ya think? Should I take Fido along too?

      • dusk arising

        Been there, done that, tripped over my tongue.

        • Neville

          aint we all, best keep ya chins up and tight lipped.... cheers DA.... N

        • Michael Edwards

          Bit like mmmm - why does it never happen to me ?
          Bit like the life class - expecting a curvacious young lady and the model turned out to be an old boy in his eighties.

          • Neville

            Thank you Michael, just never give up hoping, that's what I say...... Neville

          • Fay Slimm.

            Obviously a sad little female who shame on her teases but never plays - - manipulation is the word she enjoys metninks.

            • Neville

              I think maybe you are spot on there with your deductions Fay... top marks.. enjoy your weekend my friend.. and thanks a million N

            • Goldfinch60

              Those ladies are just teasers, you would not be able to get near them.

              • Neville

                Maybe... ta though for taking the time to tell this terrible teaser n true.......... N

              • Suresh

                I've always told a woman that she holds a power much stronger than an army of men. - foolish men, one whiff and we melt away like butter on a hot tin can

                • Neville

                  I think I thank you but also thought that was like a hot knife off of a buttered tin roof..

                • Poetic Dan

                  Brilliantly done, I see why we fall for each others spells!

                  • Neville

                    how very bloomin kind of ya..... N is most grateful....



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