Neville

Tis Only Angels Crying

Tis Only Angels Crying

 

Stay home my lord

She said

It looks like rain today

 

No my love

He said

Tis only angels crying

 

Comments8

  • Fay Slimm.

    Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a meaningful and loved first read of my day dear friend. Saved of course.

    • Neville

      there is always more than one way of looking at things and that is for sure.... bless ya Fay for checking in and checking out alternative perspectives ..... N

      • Fay Slimm.

        As ever my pleasure to view and review your inventive pieces Nev,,,,,,,, will remember those angels next time it is raining...........

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      • orchidee

        You got that brolly if ya are going out?!

        • Neville

          yes, and a machine gun... cheers

          • orchidee

            Eh? Why a machine gun?!

          • 4 more comments

          • Joker Wood

            Brief and Beautiful.

            • Neville

              so much can be said about brevity.... many thank you's my friend... Have a great day... Neville

            • Poetic Dan

              Short and sweet
              On this crisp
              Sunday morning

              Cheers captain!

              • Neville

                we must be on the same wave, tis crisp and bright here, this fine Sunday mane.. Bless ya my fine friend and true...... Neville

              • Michael Edwards

                Are you saying rain isn't angels tears - bang goes another childhood dream. lol
                A beautiful shortie Neville.

                • Neville

                  Thank you Michael, at least Father Christmas & The Tooth Fairy are legit ...... Neville

                • Goldfinch60

                  Those tears of Angels are so wonderful to dance in.

                  • Neville

                    thank you GF60 .. bathed in their golden glow.... Neville

                  • dusk arising

                    Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let us wait till we can dance to the joyous trill of angels laughter.
                    There will be days like that.....

                    • Neville

                      There have been one or two, and of course, there shall be many more... thank you for your perusal DA...... N

                    • SerenWise

                      Nice little piece, makes you think...

                      • Neville

                        I think you might be write, thank you my friend....



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