Tis Only Angels Crying

Neville

Tis Only Angels Crying

 

Stay home my lord

She said

It looks like rain today

 

No my love

He said

Tis only angels crying

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 14th, 2019 03:14
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 51
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a meaningful and loved first read of my day dear friend. Saved of course.

    • Neville

      there is always more than one way of looking at things and that is for sure.... bless ya Fay for checking in and checking out alternative perspectives ..... N

      • Fay Slimm.

        As ever my pleasure to view and review your inventive pieces Nev,,,,,,,, will remember those angels next time it is raining...........

        • Neville

          Thank you ever so my friend, that is such a nice thing to say.. I am gonna hold you to it....

        • orchidee

          You got that brolly if ya are going out?!

          • Neville

            yes, and a machine gun... cheers

            • orchidee

              Eh? Why a machine gun?!

              • Neville

                just in case you start trying to dodge my umbrella

                • orchidee

                  You trying to fend off my singing?!

                  • Neville

                    what gave you that idea...............

                    • orchidee

                      You got all your ammo out - brolly, machine gun,...…. Bit like that Mr Bean scene, where he has a picnic fends off a wasp with a knife!

                    • Nafis Light

                      Brief and Beautiful.

                      • Neville

                        so much can be said about brevity.... many thank you's my friend... Have a great day... Neville

                      • Poetic Dan

                        Short and sweet
                        On this crisp
                        Sunday morning

                        Cheers captain!

                        • Neville

                          we must be on the same wave, tis crisp and bright here, this fine Sunday mane.. Bless ya my fine friend and true...... Neville

                        • Michael Edwards

                          Are you saying rain isn't angels tears - bang goes another childhood dream. lol
                          A beautiful shortie Neville.

                          • Neville

                            Thank you Michael, at least Father Christmas & The Tooth Fairy are legit ...... Neville

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Those tears of Angels are so wonderful to dance in.

                            • Neville

                              thank you GF60 .. bathed in their golden glow.... Neville

                            • dusk arising

                              Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let us wait till we can dance to the joyous trill of angels laughter.
                              There will be days like that.....

                              • Neville

                                There have been one or two, and of course, there shall be many more... thank you for your perusal DA...... N

                              • SerenWise

                                Nice little piece, makes you think...

                                • Neville

                                  I think you might be write, thank you my friend....



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