Plum Pencil Skirt

Neville

Plum Pencil Skirt

 

I am not at all sure she ever realised

Just how good she looked

In the plum pencil skirt and matching top

 

However

When I remarked upon it she only very lightly flushed without giving anything away

 

 On reflection though maybe she was aware after all

Since she was known to gather admirers like poets save moments

 

Like old men collect their coins and campaign medals

Before eventually giving them all away

 

Yes she looked so damn good in the plum pencil skirt and matching top she wore to the old school reunion

 

Nevertheless  

I still forgot her name

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 15th, 2019 02:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    Old memories die hard Nev. and no wonder names are forgotten when shapes take centre stage !!...... I like the comparisons made in this little sketch of what school reunions can resurrect - good read.

    • Neville

      If only she had been so understanding.. bless ya Fay.... Many thanks indeed.. N

    • orchidee

      Now - should I meet her too?! heehee.

      • Neville

        No.. plum is the wrong colour and would clash with your eyes and nose... but thanks for showing an interest.. I will pass your inquiry on.... N

      • Michael Edwards

        A great observational write - it held me with every word.

        • Neville

          thank you Michael..... N

        • dusk arising

          Ha ha yes, the world is full of great looking but quite forgettable ladies.

          • Neville

            Tell me about it..... cheers DA

          • Suresh

            What was her name again....

            • Neville

              A gentleman never tells, but thanks for askin ..... N

            • Goldfinch60

              Those ladies are never forgotten even if you cannot remember their names.

              • Neville

                How very bloomin true GF60... thank you for reminding me.... N

              • Christina8

                It was me! LOL No, this is a great poem, Neville. So well written!

                • Neville

                  thanks Christina.. yum .. am trying to picture you .. yes that will do nicely... N



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