Another New Day
As dawn introduces
Yet another new day
With a mere hint of
Gold
Against a backdrop
Of grey
Tis yet but a seed
Tho is lighting the way
For pilgrims and lovers
And those
Needing to pray
So remove those moist
Curtains
They just get in the way
Heed that light
In the distance
Tis no longer grey
It is surely golden
And glowing
Tis the birth of a
Brand new day
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Author:
Neville (
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Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new day is to see all the shades of colour waiting behind greyness - -huge thank yous for this most inspirational read my friend .
Hey.. thank you Fay.. another much appreciated visit and true............ N
On this gloomy day! Tis was delightful
How very bloomin kind of you sir... thank you Dan... N
A fine write Neville. Pity I have to ruin every day by coming along and singing! Fido tries to bark loud enough to drown it out. He has ear-plugs too.
thank you for the visit orchidee.... Neville
Did ya hear me singing? Or ya chose not to hear me?! Fido thinks it's a cat - meeoowwooo!!
I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i say never take the lid off my coffin till after dusk....
Nice writing N.... so that's what it's like at dawn...
...but what strange habits some folk must have wiping things on the curtains to leave them damp overnight..... surely the central heating would dry them out.
thank you DA.... Neville
How beautifully described the dawning of the day,
To open ones eyes (curtains) and move one butts and get going on their merry way
There ya go.. you are a poet.... thank you Suresh & muchly so.... Neville
And when those grey clouds clear they will reveal a landscape of though so intricate and beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Great work.
How very bloomin kind of you sir.... we like to believe tho in the great scheme of things, no man is above man ..... Neville
Great stuff Neville.
Thank you once again Michael.... Neville
Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done
How very kind and much appreciated you are Seren..... thank you, Neville
Each moment of each day is so very special, do not waste them.
Cheers GF60.. no chance of wasting any, not even a micro second... Neville
Oohh 40 views of this poem you have had. Prob cos I kept commenting, about 36 of those times. I'm a pest! lol.
Erm, another day is here now. That's 'Today's Useless (or Obvious) Information' for ya. So don't say I don't ya anything (i.e.info).
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