Another New Day

Neville

Another New Day

 

As dawn introduces

Yet another new day

With a mere hint of

Gold

Against a backdrop

Of grey

Tis yet but a seed

Tho is lighting the way

For pilgrims and lovers

And those

Needing to pray

So remove those moist

Curtains

They just get in the way

Heed that light

In the distance

Tis no longer grey

It is surely golden

And glowing

Tis the birth of a

Brand new day

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 16th, 2019 03:35
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 51
  • User favorite of this poem: kevin browne.
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Comments10

  • Fay Slimm.

    Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new day is to see all the shades of colour waiting behind greyness - -huge thank yous for this most inspirational read my friend .

    • Neville

      Hey.. thank you Fay.. another much appreciated visit and true............ N

    • Poetic Dan

      On this gloomy day! Tis was delightful

      • Neville

        How very bloomin kind of you sir... thank you Dan... N

      • orchidee

        A fine write Neville. Pity I have to ruin every day by coming along and singing! Fido tries to bark loud enough to drown it out. He has ear-plugs too.

        • Neville

          thank you for the visit orchidee.... Neville

          • orchidee

            Did ya hear me singing? Or ya chose not to hear me?! Fido thinks it's a cat - meeoowwooo!!

          • dusk arising

            I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i say never take the lid off my coffin till after dusk....

            Nice writing N.... so that's what it's like at dawn...
            ...but what strange habits some folk must have wiping things on the curtains to leave them damp overnight..... surely the central heating would dry them out.

            • Neville

              thank you DA.... Neville

            • Suresh

              How beautifully described the dawning of the day,
              To open ones eyes (curtains) and move one butts and get going on their merry way

              • Neville

                There ya go.. you are a poet.... thank you Suresh & muchly so.... Neville

              • kevin browne

                And when those grey clouds clear they will reveal a landscape of though so intricate and beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Great work.

                • Neville

                  How very bloomin kind of you sir.... we like to believe tho in the great scheme of things, no man is above man ..... Neville

                • Michael Edwards

                  Great stuff Neville.

                  • Neville

                    Thank you once again Michael.... Neville

                  • SerenWise

                    Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done

                    • Neville

                      How very kind and much appreciated you are Seren..... thank you, Neville

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Each moment of each day is so very special, do not waste them.

                      • Neville

                        Cheers GF60.. no chance of wasting any, not even a micro second... Neville

                      • orchidee

                        Oohh 40 views of this poem you have had. Prob cos I kept commenting, about 36 of those times. I'm a pest! lol.
                        Erm, another day is here now. That's 'Today's Useless (or Obvious) Information' for ya. So don't say I don't ya anything (i.e.info).



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