LIVING IN A DREAM

Michael Edwards

 

 

Observed  with closed eyes

Basking in covert sunlight

Living  in a dream.

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 18th, 2019 00:15
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 27
  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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Comments10

  • Neville

    a sight for sore eyes indeed.. I feel a smile coming on... nice one Michael......... Neville

    • Michael Edwards

      Aw thanks - and keep smiling Neville.

    • Fay Slimm.

      What a lovely morning surprise - picture and words most engaging. Thanks for this great first read of my day Mike.

    • Goldfinch60

      May that dream never fail you.

      • Michael Edwards

        Nor yours you Andy. (If you see what I mean lol)

      • Suresh

        You saw it in your mind, before the brush dipped into the first color.
        A beautiful composition

        • Michael Edwards

          I am doing more and more of these large works - someone is coming round to collect one as we speak. Thank you Suresh for your continued support.

        • orchidee

          Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was writing about me, and my attempts to sing, with that title - otherwise known as Cloud Cuckoo Land?!

          • Michael Edwards

            Is that where Fido comes from? Cheers O.

          • Laura🌻

            Michael,

            The color scheme of your painting could not have been better...
            to enable the voyeur to...
            ‘live in a dream’!
            Remarkable!

            ~Laura~

            • Michael Edwards

              Laura - you are always so kind and it means so much - thank you once again.

            • Lorna

              It's a sun lite fjord and evening is coming on and I love the picture even with my eyes closed.

              • Michael Edwards

                Ah that's beautiful - thanks Lorna.

              • dusk arising

                Super shortie today. I transposed the first two lines as soon as i read it. My mind plays games with words as you would expect.

                Amazing picture too.

                • Michael Edwards

                  And make it a 755 and why not - I get obsessed with the haiku format. Thanks so much dusk.

                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                  Good Evening Uncle Michael : Im holding the FORT for BRIAN ! That is no Dream : Its the GLACIER in Taceys Arm in ALASKA (awesome sight !) and its falling into the SEA : its a NIGHTMARE ! Iguess in a snse we all increasingly live in a DREAM : AMEN ! Im dreaming BRIAN will be here with Me on Saturday having flown 11,500 miles : I just hope my DREAM comes TRUE !
                  Blessings & PEACE
                  LOVE : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

                • MendedFences27

                  Love your dream-scape. Is that actually you standing there?
                  With "closed eyes" to see "sunlight" is truly a "dream." Well said. _ Phil A.

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Thanks Phil - yes it could be me although it wasn't intentional. That's dreams for you!



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