Observed with closed eyes
Basking in covert sunlight
Living in a dream.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Observed with closed eyes
Basking in covert sunlight
Living in a dream.
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a sight for sore eyes indeed.. I feel a smile coming on... nice one Michael......... Neville
Aw thanks - and keep smiling Neville.
What a lovely morning surprise - picture and words most engaging. Thanks for this great first read of my day Mike.
May that dream never fail you.
Nor yours you Andy. (If you see what I mean lol)
You saw it in your mind, before the brush dipped into the first color.
A beautiful composition
I am doing more and more of these large works - someone is coming round to collect one as we speak. Thank you Suresh for your continued support.
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was writing about me, and my attempts to sing, with that title - otherwise known as Cloud Cuckoo Land?!
Is that where Fido comes from? Cheers O.
Michael,
The color scheme of your painting could not have been better...
to enable the voyeur to...
‘live in a dream’!
Remarkable!
~Laura~
Laura - you are always so kind and it means so much - thank you once again.
It's a sun lite fjord and evening is coming on and I love the picture even with my eyes closed.
Ah that's beautiful - thanks Lorna.
Super shortie today. I transposed the first two lines as soon as i read it. My mind plays games with words as you would expect.
Amazing picture too.
And make it a 755 and why not - I get obsessed with the haiku format. Thanks so much dusk.
Good Evening Uncle Michael : Im holding the FORT for BRIAN ! That is no Dream : Its the GLACIER in Taceys Arm in ALASKA (awesome sight !) and its falling into the SEA : its a NIGHTMARE ! Iguess in a snse we all increasingly live in a DREAM : AMEN ! Im dreaming BRIAN will be here with Me on Saturday having flown 11,500 miles : I just hope my DREAM comes TRUE !
Blessings & PEACE
LOVE : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love your dream-scape. Is that actually you standing there?
With "closed eyes" to see "sunlight" is truly a "dream." Well said. _ Phil A.
Thanks Phil - yes it could be me although it wasn't intentional. That's dreams for you!
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