Each day we need to play.
Day to play each we need.
We need each day to play.
Need we play to each day?
To play we need each day.
Play to each day we need.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 18th, 2019 01:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of fun with six words.
- Category: Humor
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It would be almost inconceivable to think one might have any more fun than this with just these six words...a unique writing concept and henceforth to be known as the GF60 model........... High five to ya sir... N
Thank you Neville, most kind. Just a bit of fun but I might try it again some time.
I hope so.. I thought it very clever.. N
Ella sings it all and so beautifully - - and your six words whirling around play are compellingly good.
So kind Fay, thank you.
As far as I am concerned Ella could sing a telephone directory and it would still be wonderful.
A fine write
A write fine
Fine write this is.
My small attempt! Good write Gold.
Thanks Orchi,
Orchi thanks.
Very clever . Good write!
Thank you apete4010 much appreciated.
Thank you for Ella Andy.......... will try to play all day....... and of course it's music you're "playing" isn't it.
Thanks Lorna, music plays all the time in our house.
My comment to Fay was:
As far as I am concerned Ella could sing a telephone directory and it would still be wonderful.
Aha, a wordsmith at play i see.
Playtime is the daytime in the right time of our life.
Playing is good for you.
Almost identical to the Edillette form which I posted some time back - great write Andy.r
Sorry Michael, forgot about that.
Thanks fr your comment, most kind.
Play to-day, we each need
Cheated a little, but still fun.
I play such games in my head many many times.
There is a sentence in Hindi, to show the importance of punctuation, but it doesn't translate to English very well:
Crude attempt:
An enemy spy is trying to gain entrance to a fort to blow up the armory and presents a hand written note to the sentry, which says:
STOP DON'T LET GO
He was allowed in because the sentry read it as,
STOP DON'T, LET GO
Where as it was meant to read
STOP, DON'T LET GO
you can guess the outcome.
I thought you all may like this levity as well
Yes punctuation can have many idiosyncrasies,
Brilliant!!!!
Thank you Kevin.
Thanks UNCLE ANDY : I love all European Languages : BUT for : Play on Words : English is unsurpassed : the QUEEN of Languages ! Love ELLA and very appropriate at this point in time for Brian & I ! Foolish Things remind Me of BRIAN every day and he concurs : that Foolish Things remind Him of ME : Its called EMPATHETIC LOVE ! Im starting to cry now because BRIAN seems so so CLOSE and still so so FAR AWAY. Next time I do a WORK SWAP it will be with Addenbrooks Cambridge : just 50 miles away : so Brian can come every weekend !
Blessings & Love to you BOTH !
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
My pleasure Angela.
Brian will soon be with you, and your love for each other will abound.
As for your tears - I didn't think my poem was that bad. LOL.
Take care
Andy
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