Play.

Goldfinch60



Each day we need to play.

Day to play each we need.

We need each day to play.

Need we play to each day?

To play we need each day.

Play to each day we need.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 18th, 2019 01:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of fun with six words.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 28
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Comments10

  • Neville

    It would be almost inconceivable to think one might have any more fun than this with just these six words...a unique writing concept and henceforth to be known as the GF60 model........... High five to ya sir... N

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, most kind. Just a bit of fun but I might try it again some time.

      • Neville

        I hope so.. I thought it very clever.. N

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ella sings it all and so beautifully - - and your six words whirling around play are compellingly good.

        • Goldfinch60

          So kind Fay, thank you.

          As far as I am concerned Ella could sing a telephone directory and it would still be wonderful.

        • orchidee

          A fine write
          A write fine
          Fine write this is.
          My small attempt! Good write Gold.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thanks Orchi,
            Orchi thanks.

          • apete4010

            Very clever . Good write!

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you apete4010 much appreciated.

            • Lorna

              Thank you for Ella Andy.......... will try to play all day....... and of course it's music you're "playing" isn't it.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thanks Lorna, music plays all the time in our house.

                My comment to Fay was:
                As far as I am concerned Ella could sing a telephone directory and it would still be wonderful.

              • dusk arising

                Aha, a wordsmith at play i see.

                Playtime is the daytime in the right time of our life.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Playing is good for you.

                • Michael Edwards

                  Almost identical to the Edillette form which I posted some time back - great write Andy.r

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Sorry Michael, forgot about that.

                    Thanks fr your comment, most kind.

                  • Suresh

                    Play to-day, we each need

                    Cheated a little, but still fun.
                    I play such games in my head many many times.

                    There is a sentence in Hindi, to show the importance of punctuation, but it doesn't translate to English very well:

                    Crude attempt:
                    An enemy spy is trying to gain entrance to a fort to blow up the armory and presents a hand written note to the sentry, which says:

                    STOP DON'T LET GO

                    He was allowed in because the sentry read it as,

                    STOP DON'T, LET GO

                    Where as it was meant to read

                    STOP, DON'T LET GO

                    you can guess the outcome.

                    I thought you all may like this levity as well

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Yes punctuation can have many idiosyncrasies,

                    • kevin browne

                      Brilliant!!!!

                    • ANGELA & BRIAN

                      Thanks UNCLE ANDY : I love all European Languages : BUT for : Play on Words : English is unsurpassed : the QUEEN of Languages ! Love ELLA and very appropriate at this point in time for Brian & I ! Foolish Things remind Me of BRIAN every day and he concurs : that Foolish Things remind Him of ME : Its called EMPATHETIC LOVE ! Im starting to cry now because BRIAN seems so so CLOSE and still so so FAR AWAY. Next time I do a WORK SWAP it will be with Addenbrooks Cambridge : just 50 miles away : so Brian can come every weekend !
                      Blessings & Love to you BOTH !
                      Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

                      • Goldfinch60

                        My pleasure Angela.
                        Brian will soon be with you, and your love for each other will abound.

                        As for your tears - I didn't think my poem was that bad. LOL.
                        Take care
                        Andy



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