tip-toeing (re-written)

dusk arising



above the
tortured remains
of yester-days
the sun rose slowly

there was
something beautiful
tip-toeing
through the wreckage

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 21st, 2019 03:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another re-write of something i wrote a couple of years back
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., Michael Edwards.
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Comments5

  • Fay Slimm.

    Deep and altogether a lovely reminder value can hide in memories - -- saved this little gem and thanks D.A.

    • dusk arising

      Thank you so much Fay. You've made my sunday morning bright and sunny already.

    • orchidee

      A fine write dusk.

    • Michael Edwards

      Superbly expressed - a fave for me too.

      • dusk arising

        Thank you very much ME.

      • Suresh

        Salvaging the salvageable

        Indeed well written

        • dusk arising

          All in the mind. The mind - an organ of moods.

        • Goldfinch60

          Great write d a, and what a way to start the day, a fabulous piece by Weather Report.

          • dusk arising

            Thank you Goldfinch. The weather report piece is my all time fav of theirs ... a jazz blues balad with a lot of mood and feeling. There are many live recordings of it by several bands including Joe Zawinals (composer) own group. The incredible Jaco Pastorious lyrical fretless basslines shine through too.



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