Fay Slimm.

WILD.

 

 

Wild.

 

Wild the love
wert thou with me.

Wild the nights
of luxury.

Wild the bliss
slept I with thee.

Wild the cries
of ecstasy.

Wild the joy
wouldst fate agree.

 

Comments11

  • orchidee

    A fine write Fay. She's a wild lass!

    • Fay Slimm.

      She certainly is Orchi......... wild is the word.

    • Andrew Charles Forrest

      Excellent Fay
      It's good to let go sometimes I agree
      Go WILD

      • Fay Slimm.

        That seems a good mantra when we feel too hemmed in - let go and go wild......... ha - I will remember that Andrew.

      • Neville

        wild indeed and long may she remain both wild and free, but found here today on the border between romance and erotica.... Neville

        • Fay Slimm.

          Ha - -- agreed mon ami re. the border between - - didnt know whether to press that button and label the words -- tis a fair bit of both methinks - - and my thanks for this observant comment.

          • Neville

            a very sincere pleasure...

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks FAY : for a very sensuous Love Poem ! It all came true for BRIAN & I this week : snuggled up in our Love Nest (Camper Van !) You must be reading my THOUGHTS !
            Blessings & Love ANGELA & BRIAN
            🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡

            • Fay Slimm.

              Ha - I am not a thought reader but can guess what these last days have meant to you both - - make the best of your remaining days with happy memories and the months will just slip by - - thank you so much for your visit and comment dear duo........... blessings galore and big hugs. xxxxx

            • moordykspot2

              Another one Politely phrased but full if raw emotion and induces thoughts that perhaps should not be induced. Entrantress/ Seductress Both.Young Fay you are a marvell. Thank you

              • Fay Slimm.

                What a delightful comment and thank you so much - - so pleased ;you were moved by the read my friend.

              • Suresh

                I imagine her thinking which words to use, keep it exotic or erotic.

                Beautiful piece indeed

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Well your imagined choices would go through her mind before writing methinks - thanks dear friend for your most interesting comment.

                • Theta the scholar

                  Very wild very explicit and very well written. keep up the good work.
                  - T

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Ah - a sincere thank you Theta for your perceptive comment and I will certainly try to keep up the postings...............

                  • dusk arising

                    The pictured lady awaits fate. Wild the smile inside.

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      I should imagine that describes well her smile at what really awaits -- thanks so much D.A. for your read and time commenting on this romantic lady's hope for changes in lifestyle..........

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Ooh - you've got me all excited

                      • Fay Slimm.

                        Oooh - go have a cold shower to cope better dear Michael........... ha - - so glad you liked the emotion behind these few lines.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Great sensuous write Fay.

                        • Fay Slimm.

                          Grateful thanks dear friend for your visit and comment.

                        • Laura🌻

                          My Dear Fay,

                          I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful write! I love the painting! The first time you posted this painting, it fascinated me! Seeing it again, has had the same effect it had the first time! I think she’s quietly provoking her thinking...thinking of what she should write on that blank page...or perhaps she is reading what she was provoked to write on that page which is no longer blank!
                          I wonder if that painting inspired you to write your sensuous poem!

                          Excellent!

                          ~Laura~

                          • Fay Slimm.

                            Hello and thank you dear Laura - I wrote the piece quite a while back and brought it to light again only recently - I thought though the picture enhanced the mood of my poem - she certainly does look like she has written an intimate and sensuous few lines of longing. Am so pleased you liked both the painting and poetry . An honour too that you have saved this piece into your favourites and thank you again......... from Fay

                            • Laura🌻

                              My pleasure, my dear Fay!😊



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