I didn't want to say it
but the truth is I have
Asked in my head
Then Said out Loud
That in less than 24 hours
My question will be answered
I'm not saying I'd be disappointed
Although a female we desire
For quite a number of reasons
This is our desire to be
I'll digress if I go into them all.. But
My other half has none in her family
I'm blessed with both in my tribe already
She currently has a boy, with lots of male cousins
I honestly feel this unit, could do with some more balance
So now I'm writing this to say before that exciting day
That no matter what my thoughts have to say
I know when I see you on that TV screen, my love will fade everything
I'll just be glad knowing you're healthy and on your the way
Where will laugh, cry and say...
Hip hop horary
It's your birthday
I'll try not to call you Sue
Okay
(Johnny Cash ref)
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
Offline) - Published: May 2nd, 2019 01:29
- Comment from author about the poem: At 3pm today, I hope little one legs aren't crossed or ill have to wait until actual day! My baby is due in September
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Oh lol, I know a Susan. She flies into a rage (sort of) if anyone calls her Sue! lol. I can't say I like being called Sue much myself - seeing my name is Steven. heehee.
Ha ha that was great Steve!
Much appreciated
Another great cheek in tongue write - errr - have I got that right?
Brilliantly said, anything for you sir! Is my mind of right.
May that birthday be filled with joy, humour and love.
They will now I've received your words above, thank you and Always appreciated
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
I absolutely love the rhythm of your rhyme.
Always appreciated
But I'll be honest I even looked up the word to understand the meaning.
Hang on, as I write this I guess your point was become more confident and stuff... Bit slow on that one, well done lol
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