The question

Poetic Dan



I didn't want to say it
but the truth is I have
Asked in my head
Then Said out Loud

 

That in less than 24 hours
My question will be answered
I'm not saying I'd be disappointed
Although a female we desire

 

For quite a number of reasons
This is our desire to be
I'll digress if I go into them all.. But
My other half has none in her family
I'm blessed with both in my tribe already

 

She currently has a boy, with lots of male cousins
I honestly feel this unit, could do with some more balance

 

So now I'm writing this to say before that exciting day
That no matter what my thoughts have to say
I know when I see you on that TV screen, my love will fade everything

 

I'll just be glad knowing you're healthy and on your the way

 

Where will laugh, cry and say...
Hip hop horary
It's your birthday

 

I'll try not to call you Sue
Okay
(Johnny Cash ref)

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 2nd, 2019 01:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: At 3pm today, I hope little one legs aren't crossed or ill have to wait until actual day! My baby is due in September
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Comments5

  • orchidee

    Oh lol, I know a Susan. She flies into a rage (sort of) if anyone calls her Sue! lol. I can't say I like being called Sue much myself - seeing my name is Steven. heehee.

    • Poetic Dan

      Ha ha that was great Steve!
      Much appreciated

    • Michael Edwards

      Another great cheek in tongue write - errr - have I got that right?

      • Poetic Dan

        Brilliantly said, anything for you sir! Is my mind of right.

      • Goldfinch60

        May that birthday be filled with joy, humour and love.

        • Poetic Dan

          They will now I've received your words above, thank you and Always appreciated

        • Suresh

          This bundle of joy that soon cometh
          The reason of your being becometh

        • Suresh

          This bundle of joy that soon cometh
          The reason of your being becometh

          • Poetic Dan

            I absolutely love the rhythm of your rhyme.
            Always appreciated
            But I'll be honest I even looked up the word to understand the meaning.

            Hang on, as I write this I guess your point was become more confident and stuff... Bit slow on that one, well done lol



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