Gender revealing

Poetic Dan



I can't believe it is a girl
My partner tears
Could of filled
Up a well

 

Let alone her
Beautiful magical
Squeal

 

The sound of happiness
Filled up my world

 

My heart got lost
Upon the reveal

 

As if my eyes could not
Believe what they feel

 

Then it sunk in
With a rhyme

 

As my eyes began to cry
Over come with butterflies
Absorb from my packs vibes

 

Looking forward to the day

We get to welcome in

Our little sparkle

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 3rd, 2019 02:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: I honestly can't believe life is now handing me all that I ask for, if day I'm lost for words but last night I was up till 2am writing at least 5 to add to my collection! Much peace and respect Hope you all have a wonderful day!
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    Lovely write Dan.

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    CONGRATULATIONS! and love to ou all
    There are no words Dan... but great fun trying.
    Enjoy enjoy and enjoy!
    ... and film everything she'll change so fast it'll mke you dry all over again when you're older (More happy tears)

    • Poetic Dan

      Yeah I can imagine as oldest is nearly 15 and that all ready feels like a life time ago.

      Thank you very much for sharing this with me

      • Andrew Charles Forrest

        Where do the years go?

      • Neville

        yes indeed.. here's looking forward to eventually welcoming you to the world Little Sparkle...... a lovely post and a smashing video ..... Neville

        • Poetic Dan

          Could never thank you enough for joining me on this journey and blessed to have your blessings my friend!
          Always appreciated

        • Suresh

          May your pitcher of joy be always full
          Drink from it and dole it out freely

          • Poetic Dan

            Brilliantly said thank you my Friend
            Always appreciated
            I all continue to dole it out completely

          • Michael Edwards

            What a heart warming read - I know you deserve the joy - so enjoy it.

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you so much
              As do we all but I'll take it!

            • SerenWise

              Beautiful!

            • Fay Slimm.

              A great expectation of joy when that little sparkle makes her entrance - thank you for sharing this waiting time with us dear Dan - - - a lovely read.

              • Poetic Dan

                Thank you for helping it feel like even more of a celebration!
                I feel very lucky
                Alway appreciated

              • Goldfinch60

                May that sparkle see the world of love and joy that you can give her. Congratulations.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Thank you my friend I'm sure she will, thank you for joining us!
                  Always appreciated



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