Babies Don’t Bounce

Neville

Babies Don’t Bounce

 

Babies don’t bounce

Bulace are blue

Babies don’t bounce

Bruises are too

Babies don’t bounce

Brute that you are

Babies don’t bounce

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 3rd, 2019 03:00
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my posting today) - - means what readers think - and I see a strong message on how not to treat offspring -- - or is it ?

  • Neville

    Unfortunately and far too often there are folk that try to test the theory out... bless ya Fay .... Neville

  • orchidee

    A fine write N.

    • Neville

      thank you my friend... Neville

    • Andrew Charles Forrest

      I was dropped on my head as a baby
      Never did me any HaRGBMKJNBVCSDHIGG
      Sorry where was I?

      Great write N

      • Neville

        accidents of course do happen, it is the non accidental injuries & harm that concern me here....thank you for visiting my friend ..... Neville

        • Andrew Charles Forrest

          Joking aside... Of course
          There are some evil people ot there

        • moordykspot2

          Consise True in every line. A neccessary Message in todays world. Thank you

          • Neville

            thank you ever so, my friend and muchly meant..... Neville

          • JB

            oh

            • Neville

              dont try it at home..

            • Suresh

              NO, THEY DON'T

              • Neville

                damn right they dont....

              • Michael Edwards

                When it comes to babies and children I melt - how can anyone act in this way - this packs a message with the strongest of punches.

                • Neville

                  thank you Michael, that as I am sure you are aware, was my intention.... Neville

                • SerenWise

                  This is very powerful, I had an almost physical reaction...

                  • Neville

                    you must be more careful... thanks for checking in.... N

                  • Goldfinch60

                    I just cannot understand why people mistreat children, it is the one thing that I could not reconcile with the ideal of Christian forgiveness.
                    Unfortunately it seems to be happening more and more in this world of ours.

                    • Neville

                      It certainly happens .... thank you for visiting these words my friend.... Neville

                    • Poetic Dan

                      But....
                      They do in a door swing
                      Or a special chair

                      They do on my knee
                      Or on my sofa

                      We can bounce with love
                      But not anger

                      I was going to write something else but then changed it to the above.
                      As you I read the comments I thought of being a young parent, that till was not easy and I could understand how easy it must be to loose control when a scream child won't stop!
                      May have to try and write this one out now..
                      Cheers for the inspiration

                      Much peace and respect

                      • Neville

                        thanks for checking in P Dan..... N



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