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Michael Edwards

 

 

Unwrite the notes

of tunes once heard

no more promote

the songs now blurred

as notes erode

in decompose

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 4th, 2019 00:58
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    Did the DRAGON FLY
    Lick : The flagon dry ?

    GOOD MORNING FRIEND its 7:30pm (SAT) here ! Thanks UNCLE MIKE for making me SMILE through my tears : My BIG BEAR has flown and I am all alone again : naturally. Loved the POEM *The Carnival is over* and it really is for ME til October ! In retrospect the South Island Mystery Tour was too too MAGICAL and it ended too too soon. I*ll be back @ work on Monday and that will ease my PAIN : I need a top to toe MASSAGE !
    Blessings & much JOY
    Love through ART : Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

    • Michael Edwards

      Awww - I feel for you - so here's to the next time.

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic M. Aww, why they hope this will happen to my tunes when I start to sing? lol.

      • Michael Edwards

        Sing songs without words - and no conductor' and no instruments, and no music and no voice. Just let the song waft away - can't beat a good waft.

        • orchidee

          Should I see Waff Berle about this. Dunno what the Waff stands for though!

        • Neville

          and when a tree falls in a forest with no one to hear, does it make a sound... kinda springs to mind .. certainly enjoyed.... Neville

          • Michael Edwards

            No one will twig it
            Unless they see it

          • Suresh

            i believe you poem is saying:
            "Erase that which I can't recall and is fading from memory"

            Maybe I am on the wrong track.

            • Michael Edwards

              Actually I haven't a clue what I was writing about - there just seemed a sort of strange flow to the words.

            • MendedFences27

              Refresh the memories, with something new. Yuck! Replace the old music with today's junk. Never! I must agree though that clearing out the old memories and living for today is a wise choice.- Phil A.

            • Goldfinch60

              Clever write Michael, thank you.

              "I was passing Beethoven's grave and heard his music being played backwards coming from it, I asked a gardener about it and he said "Oh yes, he is decomposing".



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