Loves Light FIBS.

Goldfinch60



A

Day

Where love

Shone brightly

Ever brightening

Into a world of loving peace

Never failing us

Always light

Never

Dark

Times

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2019 01:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: A FIBS is a Fibonacci sequence, each line has the total number of syllables in it from the previous two lines. Sorry dusk arising. As for "The Twist" my next door in my very early teens the girl next door and I used to dance it together when it first came out in 1959/60, we were very good friends at the time, I am still in contact with her after all this time.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • Neville

    a canny composition if ever there was & true, no fibbing...... N

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, it is the only time I FIB.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Excellent fibs used to highlight love dear Goldy - thank you for sharing it and the great number too .

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fay, I like doing FIBS. As for 'The Twist' that takes me back a long, long way.

      • Andrew Charles Forrest

        To coin a phrase
        "The best things... happen when you're dancin'"
        Nice G

        • Goldfinch60

          So true Andrew, but I don't dance too much now except maybe when I want to go to the loo.

          • Andrew Charles Forrest

            LOL The midnght Fandango
            Me too!

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ GREAT VIDEO ~ WE have one on JIVE for a Poem about Dancing ~ to be published ! I have landed ~ one gets an extra 12 hours when one returns from NEW ZEALAND. Angela & I love Dancing and at Weddings we are still YOUNG enough to be able to get down and up again without falling over like many Seniors do !
            Blessings & Happy Memories to YOU & JOYCE
            Love in the SPIRIT ~ B & A ~ 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
            Thanks for the FIBS ~ great shape !

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Brian. Ah yes - getting down is easy - getting up isn't.

            • Poetic Dan

              Classic! My school disco's would never of been the same with out this tune, you'll find me on that dance floor!

              Thanks for the morning twist and rhythmic rhyming!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Dan, that song was one of those which changed life in the early sixties, the young generation of that time, including me, felt a freedom that had been missing in the fifties.

              • Michael Edwards

                Loved CC - and could manage the jive but other dance did, and still do, elude me. Yes I love the structure - super poem.

                • Goldfinch60

                  I used to dance 'back in the day' the only dance I do now is to the loo.

                • Suresh

                  You Fib, well....

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Much practice. Thank you Suresh.

                  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                    A fantastic love poem, dances to a jig in words.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you s. most kind.

                    • moordykspot2

                      A special place does exist in this super read for me. Now how do I get in. Thank you for this my friend took me away from this place



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