I can't tell you about them, but I can tell you about me
If I shower you in affection, it's not because I want you to be my lady
I've had plenty of you through my life, helping me become the inner light
For fighting as the dark male side, came a bit easier than I'd liked
As a visual sonographer I've seen you all there, as a breath of air always everywhere
It's within my power to keep you there
Then you would be in my place
Seeing all of your fire & grace
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thank you for helping me find mine, the lady comes first every time!
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reads like a statement made while standing before a mirror, contemplating a pronouncement yet to be made, or like a prayer and a pledge..... Neville
Thank you, I'm not sure I got across what I wanted too but I've got plenty of more time that!
Always appreciated my friend
The Lady ALWAYS comes first - well mine does - love her dearly. Fine write PD
Thank you my friend, would of thought nothing less of your spirit
In her happiness lies yours, so it confers that the lady comes first.
Well sceneographed.
Dam it... sonographer!
I never see these mistakes
Always appreciated
Glad you see the same
As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.
Thank you Andy, you set a great example my friend
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