If you were in my place

Poetic Dan

I can't tell you about them, but I can tell you about me

If I shower you in affection, it's not because I want you to be my lady


I've had plenty of you through my life, helping me become the inner light
For fighting as the dark male side, came a bit easier than I'd liked


As a visual sonographer I've seen you all there, as a breath of air always everywhere


It's within my power to keep you there


Then you would be in my place
Seeing all of your fire & grace



  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2019 02:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: Thank you for helping me find mine, the lady comes first every time!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
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  • Neville

    reads like a statement made while standing before a mirror, contemplating a pronouncement yet to be made, or like a prayer and a pledge..... Neville

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you, I'm not sure I got across what I wanted too but I've got plenty of more time that!
      Always appreciated my friend

    • Michael Edwards

      The Lady ALWAYS comes first - well mine does - love her dearly. Fine write PD

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you my friend, would of thought nothing less of your spirit

      • Suresh

        In her happiness lies yours, so it confers that the lady comes first.
        Well sceneographed.

        • Poetic Dan

          Dam it... sonographer!
          I never see these mistakes

          Always appreciated
          Glad you see the same

        • Goldfinch60

          As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you Andy, you set a great example my friend

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