MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR ~ A SONNET OF DOUBLETS

ANGELA & BRIAN



 

🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN🧡 SOUTH ISLAND SAGA🧡 

 

Flying down from AUCKLAND : CHRISTCHURCH is a dream

Very welcoming City : everything pristine

Then on to DUNEDIN : A very Scottish City

Men in Kilts (commando ?) : All the Girls so Pretty ! 

We covered ground to MILFORD SOUND : Waterfalls & Dolphin

All afloat on a lovely boat : much more fun than Golfin*

Next we went to QUEENSTOWN : Worthy of her name

Took a ride on the Cable Glide : not Bungee Jumping ? Shame !

We took a look at Old Mount Cook : It really was excitin*

Covered in SNOW and all aglow : with Thunder & with Lightnin*

Next port of call the GLACIERS : Franz Josef & the Fox

I hired a Helicopter : to fly outside the Box !

Our tour was almost over : we*d soon be out to grass

So we finished high : three thousand feet : in Uncle Arthur*s Pass !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love A & B 🧡🧡🧡

 

THESE EIGHT DAYS with BRIAN in S Island NZ have been

the *best week* in my life ! Not only was it completely

different from N Island : High Snow Capped Mountains :

Huge Lakes : Fjords & Glaciers with real Snowball Snow !

BUT the best part was just BRIAN & I : snug as two bugs

in a rug ! In the Blue VW VAN ! Living in close proximity

with BRIAN for eight days : convinced ME : more than ever

that Our Love was made in Heaven ! BRIAN thinks so too !

I wish He could have stayed in NZ (working in the UNI or

the Hospital Path Lab).  But I do know He is returning for

Me in OCTOBER (2019) to take me Home to Essex UK !

To be with HIM for ever : AMEN : Love : ANGELA🧡 BRIAN !     

  • Author: ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2019 02:49
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Comments7

  • Michael Edwards

    So pleased it all went so well - great write too.

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      Thanks UNCLE MICHAEL : Pleased you enjoyed the summary ! To some extent reliving it in RHYME brought a smile to my face and compensated (to some extent) for BRIANS return to Essex ! We really enjoyed our time together and because we are both busy : OCTOBER is metaphorically just around the corner !
      Blessings & Peace & Joy
      Love through Poetry & Art : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      Thanks ANGEL for a perfect *Sonnet of Doublets* to summerise our TOUR of S Isalnd NZ ! As you know I have landed safe and at Church this morning they were all eager to have a report so I said a few words as to how blest we had been with the weather (apart from Mt Cook) and an accident free trip ! Thanks for choosing the VW ~ very reliable Camper Van. I have pinned a copy of your Poem on the notice Board ~ The Scots were amused by the reference to COMMANDO ! I like the concept of the Helicopter *Flying outside the Box* It sure gve me a view I shall never ever forget. Your tribute to me made me both Blush & Cry at the same time ~ but I am glad you added that *BRIAN thinks so too* We really are a match made in HEAVEN. There is a nice comment from Uncle Mike but I'll leave you to answer that when you wake up ! It seems strange without you to make me laugh & smile but we will both be preoccupied with our WORK tomorrow ~ You in your small Corner ~ and 11,500 miles away ~ I in mine ! Es esta la VIDA !
      Muchos Abrazos y Besos con todo de Mi Amor
      El tuo Oso Grande ~ BRIAN ~ 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        Gracias El Mio Oso Grande ! Pleased you enjoyed my summary & tribute : the latter : Era directa de mi carazon ! Have a good day back at work tomorrow !
        Abrazos y Besos con todo de Mi Amor tambien
        La Tua Angela : 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

      • Suresh

        Stores these on a USB, but more so, store these in your heart.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Thanks SURESH : Yes they are stored in our Hearts forever !

          Blessings & Peace & Love
          Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

        • Fay Slimm.

          A fantastically good rhyme on your wonderful tour of South Island and thanks so much for sharing some of its joys with us dear duo.

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks FAY : I suppose RHYME does lift a POEM and makes it much more recitable ! Performance POETS like PAM AYRES always use lots of RHYME ! For me rhyming couplets are the easiest form and have a great rhythm when recited ! Pleased you enjoyed both the Style & the Subject !

            Blessings & Peace & Love
            Yours as aways ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • orchidee

            A lovely write B&A. Woof! But why is Fido barking? The 'commando' line! heehee.
            I thought I met a Fido today - a loud bark but smallish dog.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              Thanks UNCLE STEVE : Fido is a great censor ! For some SCOTS *Commando* is de rigeur when wearing a KILT it is imortalised in the Carry On Film *Up the KHYBER !* Pleased you enjoyed the TRIP even if it sent FIDO BARKING ! He must be an embarassment if ever you go Window Shopping in Amsterdam !
              Blessings & A Marrow Bone for FIDO
              Love in the Spirit : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

            • Goldfinch60

              It was obviously a great eight days and you have proved to yourselves that being together forever was made for you, that time will soon be upon you and you will then be together for infinity.

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                Thanks for your support UNCLE ANDY ! YES BRIAN & I are very relaxed in each others company : we have a lot in common and we are the best of Friends ! Eight days in a Camper Van either makes or breaks a Friendship. We were quite tired at the end of each day so we slept well ! I love the idea of being with BRIAN for INFINITY : AMEN
                Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE
                Yours as always : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

              • moordykspot2

                Lovely Write Such a joy to read of such happiness Every credit to you both. thank you

                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                  Thanks MOORDY : Pleased you enjoyed the TOUR & the TOGETHERNESS : We just enjoy to share our Love with everyone on MPS
                  Blessings & Love
                  ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡



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