Dear Capricorn
The remnants of a childhood
Defile and decorate
The lonely space between
Her ribs and shoulder blade
Like old reptile skins or silk brocade
The much abused and perfect wound
Cries out for solitude
Dear Capricorn
I only want to rest my head upon
Your silver anklet chain again
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Author:
Neville (
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A tender and understanding verse on the effect an abused childhood leaves behind - -- - though a loving finalé to end this poignant reminder . Thank you for sharing it Nev.
thank you Fay... much appreciated... Neville
I interpreted this in the same way as Fay before I read her comment - a poignant write - cheers Neville.
Many thanks indeed Michael..... Neville
Good write N.
Thank you O.... N
A snippet of mine, best describes my feeling on your well composed words here
Those physical scars, for world to see,
Those etched in mind, are only for me
how very kind.. how very cool.. thank you Suresh.... Neville
If you don't mind,Bill share the snippet today
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Very emotive write Neville.
Bless you my fine feathered friend........ Neville
Heartfelt It strikes at emotive feeling my friend Another string to your talented bow. Thankyou
thank you my friend.... Neville
Beautifully written, I particularly love the first verse and the metaphor used there.
How very kind of you... thanks, Neville
Had to take a deep breath after this....
Thank you
Thank you my friend
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