Michael Edwards






Obscure senryus

frequently making no sense



  • dusk arising

    Japanese form. Ah-so!

  • Goldfinch60

    Obscure Senryus,
    Emotionally untrue,

    • Michael Edwards

      A brill write Andy
      getting into the spirit
      please pass the whisky.

    • orchidee

      Yep, that's quite obscure M!

      • Michael Edwards

        Did you ever meet Obs Cure?

        • orchidee

          Nope, never met him. Miss Berles visit your Open Studios?

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !

          Blessings & Joy & Peace
          Yours BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

          • Michael Edwards

            Uncle Mike here - love 5 syllable words.

          • Suresh

            Still scratching my head!

          • Poetic Dan

            Enjoyed but out of my league

            • Michael Edwards

              We might be in different leagues but the standards are of equal footing.
              Cheers PD

            • FineB

              Hello Michael.

              Thank you for this superb write.

              Always keep the creative process going.

              Keep writing FineB.

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