OBSCURE SENRYUS – THE COLLECTION. (1)
Obscure senryus
frequently making no sense
paediatrician.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: May 9th, 2019 00:10
- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of nonsense originally posted in Fusions - now publishing here over the next few days as I am out of new stuff - too busy with Open Studios for a week or so.
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Comments7
Japanese form. Ah-so!
Please don't sew mine !! 😊
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
A brill write Andy
getting into the spirit
please pass the whisky.
Yep, that's quite obscure M!
Did you ever meet Obs Cure?
Nope, never met him. Miss Berles visit your Open Studios?
Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Uncle Mike here - love 5 syllable words.
HMMMMMM!!!!!!!!
Still scratching my head!
So am I 😊
Enjoyed but out of my league
We might be in different leagues but the standards are of equal footing.
Cheers PD
Hello Michael.
Thank you for this superb write.
Always keep the creative process going.
Keep writing FineB.
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