Wallpaper fading
Sun rays through open windows
Chicken in oven.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Wallpaper fading
Sun rays through open windows
Chicken in oven.
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Flummuxed!
You're meant to be - it's nonsense.
BUT - how about an old dilapidated house in early morning, but at least lunch is in the oven - so there's always something to look forward to.
These writings are effectively abstracts and it's up to the reader to place an interpretation on them - imho better than realism where it has to be spelt out - and it's fun.
Ah gotcha... you mean like reading the bible.
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My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
I warn you, you have started something now!
Can't wait.
You cooking that roast dinner there?!
Yup - cockaloo and spuds roasted in goose fat with herbs and seasoning. Not to mention the veg.
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.
Ah that's a great interpretation Fay.j
The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
smiled at all the Passers by
wishing it was JUNE !
TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
It taunts the reader to think, but being a simpleton I deduced and then read your response to 'dusk'. So I wasn't a total fool.
Loved the colors in your works today.
Abstract it is. You've given us. "wallpaper fading" (an old home), "Sun rays" (daytime) , 'Chicken in oven' (lunch or supper). "open windows" (they burnt the chicken).
An elderly couple in their old home, either fell asleep or forgot about the chicken they were cooking - .
Abstract by Phil A.
How the imagination works - thanks so much Phil
Hello Michael,
Cute poem. Ah life in all its simplicity.
Lovely picture too.
Keep writing FineB
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