OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)

Michael Edwards

 

 

Wallpaper fading
Sun rays through open windows
Chicken in oven.

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 10th, 2019 00:26
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • dusk arising

    Flummuxed!

    • Michael Edwards

      You're meant to be - it's nonsense.
      BUT - how about an old dilapidated house in early morning, but at least lunch is in the oven - so there's always something to look forward to.

      These writings are effectively abstracts and it's up to the reader to place an interpretation on them - imho better than realism where it has to be spelt out - and it's fun.

      • dusk arising

        Ah gotcha... you mean like reading the bible.

        • Michael Edwards

          Spot on DA.

        • Goldfinch60

          My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.

        • Goldfinch60

          I warn you, you have started something now!

        • orchidee

          You cooking that roast dinner there?!

          • Michael Edwards

            Yup - cockaloo and spuds roasted in goose fat with herbs and seasoning. Not to mention the veg.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.

            • Michael Edwards

              Ah that's a great interpretation Fay.j

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
              smiled at all the Passers by
              wishing it was JUNE !

              TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡

            • Suresh

              It taunts the reader to think, but being a simpleton I deduced and then read your response to 'dusk'. So I wasn't a total fool.

              Loved the colors in your works today.

            • MendedFences27

              Abstract it is. You've given us. "wallpaper fading" (an old home), "Sun rays" (daytime) , 'Chicken in oven' (lunch or supper). "open windows" (they burnt the chicken).

              An elderly couple in their old home, either fell asleep or forgot about the chicken they were cooking - .
              Abstract by Phil A.

              • Michael Edwards

                How the imagination works - thanks so much Phil

              • FineB

                Hello Michael,

                Cute poem. Ah life in all its simplicity.

                Lovely picture too.

                Keep writing FineB



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