Ordered Serenity.

Goldfinch60



The new week started

In the chaos left over,

Chaos left over from the previous week.

But order prevailed,

Prevailed by those,

Those who new what they were doing.

So all was right in the world once more,

And life continued in its serenity,

Its ordered serenity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 11th, 2019 01:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this for some people I know, they were away last week and the people that stood in for them created havoc. I have pout the Dave Allen sketch up to give you a laugh.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 33
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.

  • Goldfinch60

    Thanks Orchi.

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    Thanks UNCLE ANDY : Pleased Ordered Serenity has been restored ! I was brought up a CATHOLIC and now I appreciate some of the Linguistic & Theological problems experienced by Priests & Nuns as they tried to explain the Catechism before our First Communion !

    Blessings & Peace & Serenity for YOU & JOYCE
    Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

  • Poetic Dan

    I am still laughing at that video, what a fantastic way to start my morning. My cheeks are hurting, you are a gift that just keeps giving my friend.
    Thank you
    Very much appreciated

    • Goldfinch60

      Dave Allen is one of the funniest men I have known he is always worth seeing.

      Thank youi for you kind comments my friend, always appreciated.

    • FineB

      Hello Goldfinch60,

      Thank you. A superb write.

      We all need it serenity in our lives I certainly need it where I work.

      Keep writing FineB

      • Goldfinch60

        WE certainly do FineB, serenity is so healing.

      • Michael Edwards

        Great write and thanks for the one and only DA clip.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Michael, as we know DA is so funny.

        • Suresh

          First time watching an inserted video, still laughing
          Thnx

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Suresh.

            Dave Allen is one of the funniest men I have known.



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