Untitled - XI
05/04/2019
The cloak of indoctrination - compassion
The shroud of deception - compassion
- Author: Suresh ( Offline)
- Published: May 12th, 2019 02:37
- Comment from author about the poem: Those seeking power, those selling something (from religion down) it's all souls as "for my benefit"
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 23
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Comments7
It's a dilema S
Great write
Can you only sell something someone wants to buy
Like this questions you pose
well done
BEWARE OF GREEKS BRINGING GIFTS
REMEMBER THE TROJAN HORSE
PEOPLE ARE AT THEIR MOST CHARMING
WHEN THERE IS A SELFISH MOTIVE !
Thanks SURESH for caring & sharing
Love through POETRY : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Brilliant
Love it yet I'm still puzzling over it.
Shame that cloaks and shrouds should be necessary. Maybe once removed, the truth will prevail?
Excellent concise thought provoking POWERFUL composition.
Into my favourites.
ALAS!!!!! What\'s removed (changes) is only the person underneath it.
Then being true to ourselves without indoctrination, coaching, peodophillia, and terrifying will finally out!
Trust is a things that can be so undermining.
Tis like the sword of Damocles caressing ya neck... very sharp and very interesting... Neville
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