Suresh

Untitled - XI

 

Untitled - XI
05/04/2019

The cloak of indoctrination - compassion
The shroud of deception - compassion

 

Comments7

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    It's a dilema S
    Great write
    Can you only sell something someone wants to buy
    Like this questions you pose
    well done

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    BEWARE OF GREEKS BRINGING GIFTS
    REMEMBER THE TROJAN HORSE
    PEOPLE ARE AT THEIR MOST CHARMING
    WHEN THERE IS A SELFISH MOTIVE !

    Thanks SURESH for caring & sharing
    Love through POETRY : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

  • Poetic Dan

    Brilliant

  • Michael Edwards

    Love it yet I'm still puzzling over it.

  • dusk arising

    Shame that cloaks and shrouds should be necessary. Maybe once removed, the truth will prevail?

    Excellent concise thought provoking POWERFUL composition.
    Into my favourites.

    • Suresh

      ALAS!!!!! What\'s removed (changes) is only the person underneath it.

      • dusk arising

        Then being true to ourselves without indoctrination, coaching, peodophillia, and terrifying will finally out!

      • Goldfinch60

        Trust is a things that can be so undermining.

      • Neville

        Tis like the sword of Damocles caressing ya neck... very sharp and very interesting... Neville



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