OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)

Michael Edwards

 

Light dances on walls
open curtains at windows
more black sheep droppings.

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 13th, 2019 00:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    At least they fo hard
    Great write and pic Micahel
    Too big for a stamp this time

    • Michael Edwards

      It is actually a huge piece of work no longer with me.

    • dusk arising

      No worries, given enough sunshine those dropping will bleach white.
      What then shall dance upon them?

      • Michael Edwards

        Now there's the conundrum - is it the droppings that are black or is it the sheep?

        Is a cup of nice tea or a nice cup of tea?

      • Goldfinch60

        The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with it.

        Another super abstract Michael.

        • Michael Edwards

          Mint sauce droppings in rogan josh sauce. Thanks Andy.

        • orchidee

          Good write and pic M. You seen Miss Esk - Berle Esqe?

        • Fay Slimm.

          Turned white and dry they droppings make good Five Jacks didya know Mike ? Love the painting.

        • Lorna

          Rude sheep...........pretty picture.

          • Michael Edwards

            All over the lawn again - thanks Lorna.

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Almost midnight here so just trawling MPSS before I retire to bed ! In the abstract i see :

            YELLOW BIRDS HIGH IN BANANA TREE

            I love all these SENRYUS so so ABSTRACT

            Blessings & Love & Joy
            Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

            • Michael Edwards

              Thanks Angela - now this calls for an abstract senryu about bananas - tomorrow...!



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