Back to fun, my ships are done

Poetic Dan

We all have a dock full of ships















Some of these go out alone

Others join to make as one

But No matter what

They all must dock


Master craftsmanship

Keeps all things afloat



  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 14th, 2019 02:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: Can't wait to post tomorrow but that would take away today, then my harbour would be full so I'm sailing this one away. Sea you soon okay!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 20


  • kevin browne

    A combonation of some well picked words put together quite nicely.
    Wel done and thanks for sharing.

    • Poetic Dan

      Always a pleasure never a chore, just like your company my friend.

      • kevin browne

        And, you're always welcome to my company. Just send me a message if you feel the need for a chat. That would be lovely....

      • Michael Edwards

        Great format well worked - yes they keep all things afloat amidship.

        • Poetic Dan

          Yes it felt unusual and was good for me, even better now it is out.
          Always appreciate your view my friend

        • Lorna

          And you are the Captain of your Starship Dan...............

          • Poetic Dan

            Yes! I couldn't put that one in as when I did it sent me another direction, I'll wait for that lol
            Always appreciated, see you up there soon.

            • Lorna

              Beam me up!

            • dusk arising

              When ya chips are done its time to smile at the missus and tuck in....wheres the ketchup...what? ay?... ships? SHIPS? what?

              Jeez thats spoiled it, lost my appetite now.

              Twas on the good ship Venus .. by george you should have......
              .... the cabin boys name was chipper, dirty little nipper... he stuffed his arse with broken glass and circumcised the skipper

              • Poetic Dan

                I had to stop reading and whip the tears from my eyes, way to many fantastic lines. With a million smiles, I thank you for miles and miles.

                Swing in my hammock to that last part Fitted perfectly!

              • Joker Light

                I like that picture. It's the kind of photos/design that reminds me of a clown or a circus.

                • Poetic Dan

                  That would definitely define Dr Seuss!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Your ship is sailing into the new harbour of you life where the light abounds.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    That it is my friend.
                    Thank you, have a great day

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