OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)

Michael Edwards

 

Wearing a sun hat
peas picked ready for podding
shoulder the faggots.

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 16th, 2019 01:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    I hope those peas will be split to go with the faggots.

    • Michael Edwards

      No - can't beat fresh peas from the garden.

    • orchidee

      Good write and pic M. You podded and shouldered there now?!

      • Michael Edwards

        Podded and the faggots are stored in the shed ready for next years crop.

      • Poetic Dan

        Ooo must remember my hat today, top man!

        • Michael Edwards

          Get that hat on - I got quite a red face from being out all day on Tuesday - should have worn a hat.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Ahhhhh UNCLE MIKE ~ I (BRIAN) have an allotment at College and Greenhouses for teaching BIOLOGY and the taste of PEAS fresh form the POD (Raw or cooked al dente) is indescribable my word is PEASY ! They do need FAGGOTS (a multimeaning word !) to support them but ironically they complements FAGGOTS (a Northern delicasy) as well !
          FAGGOTS to GROW & FAGGOTS to GO !
          Please check ANGELAS Poem today LA MIA ABUELA and you will learn a few more Spanish words ! It is so like English you can be semi-fluent in a Year already you know thousands of Spanish words ~ you just dont know what they are !

          Always wear a HATINTHESUN ~ OK!
          Blessings & Peace & Love
          Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • Michael Edwards

            I used to be an allotmenteer too - and grew peas among other things.

          • Andrew Charles Forrest

            everything is better fresh
            Like the weather in the Pic Michael... looks bracing is it an acrylic? nicely textured if not

            • Michael Edwards

              Acrylic with sculpturing paste - thanks Andrew.

            • dusk arising

              Bring on the pie and eels

              • Michael Edwards

                Don't forget the winkles - as a lad I gathered them from Southend beach and had them as a treat when I got home - oh for the days of the winkle pin - haven't had them for years.

                • dusk arising

                  Is that a new kind of toilet for the water saving generation?

                • Suresh

                  I see a soaring hawk.
                  Yes I like the English peas, goes well with 'mutter paneer'

                  • Michael Edwards

                    A super dish (no saag) plenty of ginger and fresh cheese - mmmmm!!

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Top marks for the artwork and as for the sen. - gotta admit my shoulders found its meaning quite weighty today Mike - must be the peas I had in my salad lunch.............



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