Poetic Dan

A rhyme is a rhyme



Some say anyone can make a rhyme, but it takes the poet to make them mean something.

 

Although if every word has a meaning and every meaning brings up feelings

 

I think all they're doing, is showing what needs healing

 

As I heard what you feel on the outside, is who you are in the inside

 

A rhyme is a rhythm
No matter how big or small
To put meaning into it
That parts up to you!

 

Comments9

  • orchidee

    Must I always insist on rhyming in my poems? lol. Well, not always. I do some ad libbing too, more sort of prose thingys at times

    • Poetic Dan

      No matter what it is I'm glad to see it
      Always appreciated

    • FineB

      Thank you Poetic Dan.

      A good write.

      You have captured the essence of a poem and what makes a poet a poet.

      Keep writing
      FineB

      • Poetic Dan

        I still don't know what that is but if it means crying and laughing at ourselves, I'm in!

        Always appreciated
        Thank you kindly

      • dusk arising

        That is one lovely video. The lovely long haired German Shepherd is clearly a poet and loves to recite. The ball thing too is cleary his/her muse.

        To me, content takes precedent over rhyme everytime. Rhyming simply limits the applicable words available to the poet.
        However i do enjoy using rhyme for fun in lighthearted pieces.

        • Poetic Dan

          My friend he sings louder than I would like, but I'll glad he never got sent back to rescue shelter in Bulgaria or had to be muzzled!

          Yes, I still have to tell myself it doesn't have to but good if it does.
          Thanks for the rhyme about Brandon the German Shepherd

          We appreciate your time

        • Fay Slimm.

          You describe the reasons and essence of poetry so well here Dan - - a very fine read.

          • Poetic Dan

            That I'm truly grateful to hear, thank you kindly my dear

          • Michael Edwards

            Spot on - as an artist can see inspiration in something others dismiss so a poet can chose words that others wouldn't be able to put together.

            • Poetic Dan

              All in the eye of the beholder, always appreciated from your perspective

            • Andrew Charles Forrest

              Bang on Dan
              It's like making eggs
              we can all put eggs in a pan
              but make it something we want to eat
              That's an omelet

              • Poetic Dan

                He he, that really tiggled my fancy!
                It shall be remembered
                Always appreciated my friend
                Food for thought.....

              • Suresh

                A poets brush is their pen, and their expressions the paint.

                • Poetic Dan

                  That I can give plenty of meaning to and a brilliant picture.
                  Always brilliantly you
                  Always appreciated

                • Neville

                  Brilliantly put and more than just a tad Dr. Seuss like...

                  I like green eggs & ham .. without the ham.... Neville

                  • Poetic Dan

                    That is an honour to know as he is a legend, ham or not every one hits the spot!

                    Always appreciate your time my friend

                    • Neville

                      My pleasure..

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Poets write from the heart and the soul, as do you Dan.

                      • Poetic Dan

                        All I know my friend
                        Have a great weekend!



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