Some say anyone can make a rhyme, but it takes the poet to make them mean something.
Although if every word has a meaning and every meaning brings up feelings
I think all they're doing, is showing what needs healing
As I heard what you feel on the outside, is who you are in the inside
A rhyme is a rhythm
No matter how big or small
To put meaning into it
That parts up to you!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thought I'd add a video of a dog some called aggressive, remember we are the key. Nothing is ever as it seems. Have a great day Dana's way
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Must I always insist on rhyming in my poems? lol. Well, not always. I do some ad libbing too, more sort of prose thingys at times
No matter what it is I'm glad to see it
Always appreciated
Thank you Poetic Dan.
A good write.
You have captured the essence of a poem and what makes a poet a poet.
Keep writing
FineB
I still don't know what that is but if it means crying and laughing at ourselves, I'm in!
Always appreciated
Thank you kindly
That is one lovely video. The lovely long haired German Shepherd is clearly a poet and loves to recite. The ball thing too is cleary his/her muse.
To me, content takes precedent over rhyme everytime. Rhyming simply limits the applicable words available to the poet.
However i do enjoy using rhyme for fun in lighthearted pieces.
My friend he sings louder than I would like, but I'll glad he never got sent back to rescue shelter in Bulgaria or had to be muzzled!
Yes, I still have to tell myself it doesn't have to but good if it does.
Thanks for the rhyme about Brandon the German Shepherd
We appreciate your time
You describe the reasons and essence of poetry so well here Dan - - a very fine read.
That I'm truly grateful to hear, thank you kindly my dear
Spot on - as an artist can see inspiration in something others dismiss so a poet can chose words that others wouldn't be able to put together.
All in the eye of the beholder, always appreciated from your perspective
Bang on Dan
It's like making eggs
we can all put eggs in a pan
but make it something we want to eat
That's an omelet
He he, that really tiggled my fancy!
It shall be remembered
Always appreciated my friend
Food for thought.....
A poets brush is their pen, and their expressions the paint.
That I can give plenty of meaning to and a brilliant picture.
Always brilliantly you
Always appreciated
Brilliantly put and more than just a tad Dr. Seuss like...
I like green eggs & ham .. without the ham.... Neville
That is an honour to know as he is a legend, ham or not every one hits the spot!
Always appreciate your time my friend
My pleasure..
Poets write from the heart and the soul, as do you Dan.
All I know my friend
Have a great weekend!
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