Beautifully Broken
She fell in love with imperfections
She could see that we were flawed
With a golden thread she mended us
But twas him that she adored
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Author:
Neville (
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A type of Florence Nightingale come to mind here my friend. A tender picture of traits which we as females could do well to imitate - - thank you an inspiring first read of my day.
thank you for the early check in Fay... many thanks indeed.....Neville
Oooh so many questions
was him another him
were you THAt flawed
We need more
GREAT write Neville
thank you for that Charles... I'm certainly not perfect.... I can tell ya... Always appreciated and true... Neville
LOL good fun.
Write said Thread...... Thanks DA..... N
Good write N. Should I meet her?!
Maybe not, she's got her hands full at the moment, thanks though..... Neville
Poses a lot of questions - an intriguing write.
when you have all the answers, let me know..... thanks Michael...
Neville
Beautifully broken, beautifully done...
-Lauren
Why thank you Lauren & true.... Neville
Such a good poem, it can be imperfections in our loved ones that draw us closer to them.
Can't argue with that my friend... nice one sir and thank you from the top of ya beak to the tip of ya tail...... Enjoy Sunday..... Neville
Lovely simple write, but holds great meaning
thank you my fine literary friend... Neville
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