Upon Her Ears
At the very same time he brushed aside
That single strand of her night wilden hair
He whispered soft through grey flecked beard
Then
Blew these words upon her ears
Have no fear my love for now although
I let you go I shall return and love thee even more so
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Author:
Neville (
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Good write N. I'm gonna grow a bears and meet some of these gals!
if you grow a bear, it will either fall in love with you, or rip ya face off.. I suggest you grow a bard and then you can write a poem about it.......thanks, have a great day.... Neville
Letting go gently could not be more aptly phrased in this tender view of a last time together - a moving read Nev.
Yes indeed, I always found letting go gently, much more preferable than dropping them, as my ego did when the other way round..... thank you for your kind words and ongoing support Fay.... Neville
The ego can take a few hurts when the other way round but can bounce back given time. -- I just love the whispered intent to return in your very last line............. love affairs fade but never die.
true enough...
Your way of imparting these words speaks of so much more finesse and romance than the likes of Arnie with his "I'll be back".
A whimsical Orchi is only chasing the bear necessities of life. Hugs!
you are too generous this fair mane sir.. but as always, muchly appreciated..... Neville
Suit you sir! Very nicely done and a reminder I can't feel my lips past my tash must give this bush a trim!
me too... and thank you... N
Ah just lovely - except for that beard, fine write Neville
thank you Michael, that beard is long gone. I am now mid way to achieving a new one.... Neville
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! Im too young to be hairsuite and ANGELA prefers me to be smooth ! Perhaps one day when Im 40+ (2025 ?). Once in a while along the way ~ I have returned to former LOVES but not permenantly !
Blessings & Peace
Yours A & B 🧡🧡
Please check our latest FUSION *Whats you fave METAL ?*
and add a POEM ! We have chosen IRON ! Thanks A & B !
thank you for inviting me to your latest fusion, however, I am not a fusion kind of guy and so feel obliged to politely decline. Neville
AH! well never whispered.
Fine tease Nev
thank you my friend, why shout when ya can get the message across more clearly by whispering, that's what I say anyway...... Neville
This is lovely 🙂
Thank you dear friend and poet.... Neville
A fine gentle good bye with hopes of it being rekindled.
cheers squire..... muchly appreciated and true... N
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