Upon Her Ears

Neville

Upon Her Ears

 

At the very same time he brushed aside

That single strand of her night wilden hair

He whispered soft through grey flecked beard

 

Then

 

Blew these words upon her ears

Have no fear my love for now although

I let you go I shall return and love thee even more so

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 20th, 2019 02:27
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments10

  • orchidee

    Good write N. I'm gonna grow a bears and meet some of these gals!

  • Neville

    if you grow a bear, it will either fall in love with you, or rip ya face off.. I suggest you grow a bard and then you can write a poem about it.......thanks, have a great day.... Neville

  • Fay Slimm.

    Letting go gently could not be more aptly phrased in this tender view of a last time together - a moving read Nev.

    • Neville

      Yes indeed, I always found letting go gently, much more preferable than dropping them, as my ego did when the other way round..... thank you for your kind words and ongoing support Fay.... Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        The ego can take a few hurts when the other way round but can bounce back given time. -- I just love the whispered intent to return in your very last line............. love affairs fade but never die.

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      • dusk arising

        Your way of imparting these words speaks of so much more finesse and romance than the likes of Arnie with his "I'll be back".

        A whimsical Orchi is only chasing the bear necessities of life. Hugs!

        • Neville

          you are too generous this fair mane sir.. but as always, muchly appreciated..... Neville

        • Poetic Dan

          Suit you sir! Very nicely done and a reminder I can't feel my lips past my tash must give this bush a trim!

          • Neville

            me too... and thank you... N

          • Michael Edwards

            Ah just lovely - except for that beard, fine write Neville

            • Neville

              thank you Michael, that beard is long gone. I am now mid way to achieving a new one.... Neville

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! Im too young to be hairsuite and ANGELA prefers me to be smooth ! Perhaps one day when Im 40+ (2025 ?). Once in a while along the way ~ I have returned to former LOVES but not permenantly !

              Blessings & Peace
              Yours A & B 🧡🧡

              Please check our latest FUSION *Whats you fave METAL ?*
              and add a POEM ! We have chosen IRON ! Thanks A & B !

              • Neville

                thank you for inviting me to your latest fusion, however, I am not a fusion kind of guy and so feel obliged to politely decline. Neville

              • Suresh

                AH! well never whispered.
                Fine tease Nev

                • Neville

                  thank you my friend, why shout when ya can get the message across more clearly by whispering, that's what I say anyway...... Neville

                • SerenWise

                  This is lovely 🙂

                  • Neville

                    Thank you dear friend and poet.... Neville

                  • Goldfinch60

                    A fine gentle good bye with hopes of it being rekindled.

                    • Neville

                      cheers squire..... muchly appreciated and true... N



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