Wonderful Evening.

Goldfinch60



All was quiet,

The early evening was upon us.

My lover was sitting quietly,

Almost asleep,

So to the conservatory I went.

Put on the gentle sound of Chet

And sat down at my puzzle.

The joy of those few minutes so profound,

Just me, Chet, my puzzle and the evening,

A beautiful evening.

In my own world,

A world lost from normality,

The normality of my life,

My life of living two lives,

Mine and my lover’s dementia.

A rare evening,

Such a rare time,

Such a wonderful evening.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 21st, 2019 01:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: A rare time in my current life.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 18
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  • Neville

    I am so glad you posted this.. I do think about how things might be at home for you every now and then... it is good to know there are moments when you can relax and enjoy your evenings..... Neville

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, those moments are so rare nowadays that they become so meaningful.

      • Neville

        understandable my friend..

      • orchidee

        A good write Gold. Yes, true respite. Thinking of you both still.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Orchi, most kind.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ BRIAN HERE ! Finished teaching @ 11 so just catching up on MPS today before LUNCH. We have a Group of Seniors in the Training Restaurent today 75th Birthday so I am on Duty @ 1pm as GREETER and TOASTMASTER ! Dress Suit GAVEL & White Gloves ~ SENIORS are always worth it ! I organise the SENIOR SURFERS in the COLLEGE as part of my JOB ! Check Our POEM today *OLD THINGS* Thanks for BEEHOVEN ~ My Dads fave Composer ! Your loving POEM gave me a smile ! Music (especially TRAD JAZZ !) can transport us into another Dimension pleased you had a break ~ while your Beloved JOYCE was dozing !

          Blessings & Love & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
          Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Brian, those moments are special.

          • Michael Edwards

            I am so pleased to read this capturing write - may you have many occasions like this my good friend.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Michael, those moments are very few and far between so I value each one of them. Sayting that though I value every moment in my life.

            • dusk arising

              Blissful moments when the things we have long enjoyed come together and we feel the warmth of just being what we are.
              I suppose we all get those but for you,wearer of two hats, one of which is a very responsible, caring, protective and alert hat, these times are all the more deserved and i suppose all the more recogniseable.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you for your kind words d a, that second hat can be hard going sometimes so the moments when I am just wearing my hat are so precious.

              • Suresh

                An evening of SOLITUDE, rare and so appreciated. You deserve it, my friend
                In the midst of sadness, laughter is the key to staying sane.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Suresh. Yes laughter is the key in all the problems my wife and I can still laugh at and with each other.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  A telling write my friend and a gem of a read - knowing some evenings though rare you can feel normal with music and quiet as your companions - - and of course your love sitting near. - - may all your efforts find more often the blessings of times like these.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you for your kind words Fay, much appreciated.

                  • SerenWise

                    Beautifully written, it is so often the little things that bring us joy and they should be cherished.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you SerenWise, that is so true, those little things are so important in our lives.



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