I've got a little Gnome that nobody knows
Down in my garden where nobody goes
It ponders by a pond that is not there
Waiting for the moment, time disappears
Watching the ripples, of notion in motion
Knowing everything leaves when open
Upon each return, more splashing occurs
It just changes shape saying three words
Sit and observe
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Randomly refreshing, written late last night and now jumped my cue. I just couldn't wait to share it with you. Much peace and respect
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A real gem of a write PD - you've triggered an idea for one of my own.
Now that will keep me smiling for days, glad to give back as I still quote one of yours to people about a Penguin that got told don't try dangerous things at home, so it didn't and went round a mates!
Probably miss worded it but gets a giggle every time 😉
This should of been more fun but my brain took it another way lol
I feel quite flattered to be quoted 0 gee thanks PD
The one I have in mind is not funny in the way that the one you quote is but one to smile at if I can word it correctly - about Gnome Enid and not yet written.
A fine write Dan.
Always a pleasure and appreciated.
I used to have a gnome but he buggered off after some swine pinched his fishing rod.
He was always complaining anyway because he never had any luck with birds. "They just shit on me every time" he said.
Ha ha, you must have one for everything.
Maybe sometimes that's all we can be, I'm sure he found a place where everyone is rod free, with all the birds just pecking he's cheek.
gnome ention of the elves, pixies or fairies.... but never mind, this is just about perfect as it is....... Neville
Pmsl, that was a great pun. I reckon they are there but dissappear when in never, any questions I ask it just repeats the same thing. Waiting for me to go so they can all start raving!
Ha now I\'ve got more to go on, cheers my dears 😉
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
I can see I'm gonna have to post my gnome poem shortly.... 🙂
Your words and your pic really invoke a million thoughts.
Isn't it amazing when words freely flow, and that's poetry.
So well written,
Yes I wanted to use it for many others but looks like I was just waiting for the right one.
Yes it's strange how easy it can just enter, thank you the support.
I laugh at the thought of my teacher hearing something I wrote was classed as, well written.
Always appreciated
Wonderful write and those three words are so meaningful.
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