Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 22nd, 2019 01:17
- Comment from author about the poem: Just thinking.
- Category: Reflection
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Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
Offline)
Comments5
Good write Gold.
Tallest mountains
snowbound footprints
Yeti
A Duskiku (of uncounted syllable)
They reckon they have recently seen Yeti footprints in the Himalayas, it was reported during the last couple of weeks.
The tallest mountain
following snowbound footprints
bloody avalanche
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"There are those here among us, who think that life is but a joke" (Bob Dylan)
Great write G
With the length of our lives Andrew (a fine name) we know that life is a joke.
Andy.
That we do Andy (Fine Name also sir)
The oldest Joke nobody laughs at... sounds like one of mine
Except... The Old Laughing Lady she finds everything funny
I think it's a metaphor for Gin?
And a super thunk it is to be sure.
Thunking is dangerous.
Hello Goldfinch60,
Good reflective poem.
Keep writing FineB
Thank you FineB.
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