Words left hanging

Poetic Dan

"not suffering, doesn't mean I don't care"

Words that rang so clear, I thank the soul who put them there

It has to start, somewhere...

If I wish the world to love my offsprings
I first must appreciate everything in it!

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 22nd, 2019 05:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: It was a simple comment that I read randomly on Facebook, it opened up a trigger I've now dealt with. It's okay to be happy even though I can feel the suffering of others. Much peace and respect
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Comments7

  • Neville

    Thank the floop for Facebook then...

    Nice little post this sir... and true.. Be happy... Neville

    • Poetic Dan

      It was A gem, little you all

      • Neville

        a gem in need, is a gem indeed

      • 1 more comment

      • Fay Slimm.

        Loud applause for the wonderful ly positive words topped by colourful graphics which gave me a smile.... you are going far in the poetry world my friend.

        • Poetic Dan

          That my ears still can't believe but thank you for the belief in me.

        • Andrew Charles Forrest

          Before you can be loved you must love yourself?
          Easier said than done
          Great piece Dan

          • Poetic Dan

            Takes much practice but thoughts and words are the next step to action.

          • Suresh

            We are all the epicenter of our universe, from where are attributes ripple outwards.
            Nicely portrayed

            • Poetic Dan

              As your reflection my friend, so powerfully given back.

            • Michael Edwards

              Hear hear.

              Where?

              Greta stuff da

              • Poetic Dan

                Ha ha, perfect! Thank you

              • dusk arising

                If i wish the world to love my offspring am i guilty of deluding myself that the world is really capable of love in the first place.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Thank you so much for your words and sparking of the thoughts I'm guilty of, that would be one of them my friend.

                  Much peace and respect

                • Goldfinch60

                  Very true Dan, appreciation of life can take you so very far into glory.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Every day I gain a little bit more



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