Yesterday a huge pattern of my broke, speaking through tears that wanted to choke.
Before helping a friend say goodbye by to her child she only held for a minute, I gave all my mind, body and soul into a poem.
Moments after writing on paper boat, I got a message saying I had won a prize from InfusedLights.com.
With the most heavy of hearts I had a smile on my face, gathered by the sea to commiserate.
We walked on a small wall that was a few feet out at sea, after lightning all our love in candles and incense.
I knew that every part of me wanted to read it out loud, knowing that I was there to give and show strength.
My voice began to shake and I could feel the rock, I began to breath in a way that was not there before. Tears came, I didn't care my words needed to hit the atmosphere, it stopped and stuttered but each one mattered
After releasing this and my energy, with the power of this amazing mother grieving and still shining next to me. I felt a rush....
A shooting star I saw that night
Next day a new giving sunlight
Then a live birth in the afternoon
Now I'm writing to share it with you
Even caught it on camera too!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Life can be very unbelievable at times... You never know when your going with the flow. Hope this reads OK, have a wonderful life. Your way!
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A fine write Dan. I was never normal, even on 'normal' days! heehee. Well, I kept singing, and ruined every day. Why? Cos it was ME singing. A form of torture to have to hear it. lol.
You are the best kind of normal I know, singing or not I'd be waiting at your bus stop!
Makes you feel small LIFE!
Great captured day Dan
Thanks for sharing very moving
Enjoy what you have of it
That I am every day is getting better even in the gray!
Thank you for joining me, always appreciated
Dan,
New life, new hope!
That is an extraordinary video!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~🌻
Yes a cycle that makes it a little bit easier to let go.
Always appreciate your company, much peace and respect
We really are existing in a continuum where death is as much a part of this as is life itself and the very creation of a living being.
What you describe is i think life reaffirming the continuum in your understanding. Something we all need to experience regularly. I think that experience encourages us to love, love and love all around us.
Your words today are full of it.
That I could not be more proud of my friend, your words have kept me smiling all day!
Always appreciated
Knowing the vibration I am giving
True empathy is rare indeed, that you have so truly expressed.
Although sadness is within your words the new life brings light to our lives. New life will always be there for us all.
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