Hippopotamus.

Goldfinch60



I was walking down the street,

Glancing in the shops,

When I saw it,

Saw it in the window,

The window of a charity shop.

I thought it was wonderful,

But can I justify buying it.

So I walked passed

With the thought,

If it is there next week

I will buy it.

So along the street I walked,

Came to the shop,

And there it was.

So I went in,

Bought it,

And now I am the proud owner,

Of a carved wooden hippopotamus .

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 28th, 2019 01:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: The hippo is about twelve inches long and made of solid wood, everybody who sees it in our lounge comments on how good it is. The song is obviously the only one I could add to these words.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 21
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Comments9

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. We have one - a carved rhinoceros.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, they are fascinating are they not.

    • Andrew Charles Forrest

      Why Nottamous? Of Course
      It was meant to be
      It looks fabulous Andy and very tactile
      Y=There's something about carved wood especially animals
      Great ditty too

      • Goldfinch60

        Yes Andrew (great name), there is certainly something about carved works.

      • Michael Edwards

        I'll have to introduce him to Gnome Enid - they'll get along together. Nice one Andy.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Michael, I am sure they will.

        • dusk arising

          Come on cheapskate admit it, you only bought it cos it was 50p.

          Only kidding, I like it. Looks like a good unique piece, does the Missus reckon its a good likeness to you?

          • Goldfinch60

            Strangely I thought it was quite cheap at fifteen quid.
            Yes Joyce did see the similarity in the profile.

          • Neville

            well done you and in more ways than one too 🙂 Neville

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

              • Neville

                my pleasure sir...

              • kevin browne

                And long may your hippopotamus remain the talk of the household you live in. Nice write. Goldie!!

                • Goldfinch60

                  I am sure it will Kevin. Thank you.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  That stance of your Hippopotamus shows careful art Andy - bet you are delighted to have bought her with such a wide wooden smile.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Fay, yes I am very pleased that I bought it.

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ Im just perusing MPS in my lunch hour (1 - 2pm) Angela is (I hope !) safe in her Antipodean bed (1:45am Wednesday !) I love every jot & tittle of this presentation ! Hippos have a delightful SHAPE & 3D SYMMETRY ~ beloved of woodcarvers, A while back Angela & I where at an AFRICAN WEDDING and our names where clipped in White Metal small HIPPOS which we kept ! Wooden Hippos were on Sale for African Education for £25 ~ we bought one (similar to Yours) which I have in my Flat ready to take *Pride of Place* in *Our House* ! They sold over 100 all locally carved in Africa ! £2500 + to build a New Science & Technology Block ! Angela & I have covenanted for the new Biology Lab ! The Bride African & Groom (UK) both teach in Ghana !
                    FLANDERS & SWAN ~ Genii of the Edwardian ~Georgian Age spilling over into the ELIZABETHAN !
                    Great Poem ~ Great Music ~ Flawless Performance ameliorated by a Chorus in RUSSIAN bearing out what I have said in todays SONNET ! We have forgotten how to be Seriously Silly and though they are largely before my TIME (by the time I was 18 it was already too late ~ 2001 !) I really enjoy them ! F & S ~ Morecombe & Wise ~ The Goons ~ Ken Dodd ~ Arthur Asky ~ Less Dawson ~ John Betjeman etc etc ~ Gone but not forgotten. They were Children of their time and we shall never see their like ever AGAIN. Thank GOD for DVD's ~ AMEN !

                    Thanks for CARING & SHARING
                    Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE
                    Love in the Spirit ~ BRIAN (& ANGELA) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

                  • Suresh

                    Saw many in the river in Kenya. Shows no subject is taboo in poetry.
                    Light read indeed



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