You will come here hardly making a sound
Like a sponge you'll absorb all that's around
I'll do my best to make sure it's true and pure
So deep down you'll always hear a mighty roar
Knowing inside you an elephant never forgets
As well as a feline that knows how to project
Plus a monkey that wants to paint everything
Lastly there's the Eagle that just can't wait to feel wind
Although right now you're a sloth always napping
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Written in thought of my girl due in September and in spirit of my big one, I'm so very very proud of. Felt a bit like the circle of life as we start as sloth and end like one! Much peace and respect
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Careful with that wind M8. Though TBH i've never smelled an eagles fart. Great picture, she has you just where she needs you and you are just where you want to be. You are supporting her so she feels at home in the beautiful background of life.
You are i hope right in that we exit peacefully... for some it hasn't been that way though.
As bob marly is playing "one love" so it was at the beginning so it will be at the end.
Yeah she is becoming a bit of a handful but I know it because she is getting ready to take off!
Got to love Brighton for its inspiring vibe but we make it all what it is! Cheers for the laugh with your opening line my friend
Ha.. I am grinning so hard my cheeks ache.. and that is the bloomin truth... this is a delightful little poem and a smashing photo too.. seemingly filled with love and light and laughter....write on...
Neville
Brilliant now that I know that, my pride will stay intact as things are becoming stranger and better every day!
Good for you, and good to hear... Neville
It gave me a sort of warm smile - nice one PD
Lukewarm warm is better than cold and I've just realised my actual thought behind this.
Much appreciated!
Dan,
A super poem! Love the pic! Jorja is a beauty! She looks like she’s ready to take flight!
Have you seen “Rocketman”? It’s a great movie...if you’re a fan of Sir Elton John!
Through your writings, we’ve learned a great deal about you! All I can say is you’ve come a long way! You’ll be a great dad to that little girl who’ll be meeting you in September! She’ll have an awesome dad!
~Laura~
It's been a wonderful journey to get to a day that felt so far away, I've carried a burden over myself for to long.
With many wise souls by my side, I've passed many gateways of my past.
Thank you for your beautiful kind words and I've not seen the film but Elton John
Has since since greats
The beauty of joy and love shine through your words and the picture, a wonderful life you have Dan.
It's getting better and better with so many great vibrant souls on here and around me showing there is so much light in the world and me.
You are here in many ways with me as I try to be with each of you.
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