What has happened that
I've turned my back
Completely on the past
I'm suddenly free of all of it
And grieving now at last
Didn't think I had it in me
To come alive again
Your turn to keep me in your heart
Your turn to be my friend
Release your hold and let me breath
The air of sunny Spring
Wait if you like but be discreet
Don't hang about the wings
Don't come back while smiles abound
To cast the kiss of death
Make up your bed and think towards
Your loamy sheets of earth
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Author:
Lorna (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Morning all................
- Category: Love
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I certainly have the message you have so perfectly crafted that I was stunned as I read each line. 10 out of 10 for this one.
Could not agree more!
Glad I'm not the only one that responds with a comment, though I'd let you know š
Thank you Kevin - this was an epiphany...
Good write Lorna. Epiphany - that'll be Jan/Feb. lol.
Oh I missed that one Orchi - I don't get epiphanies in Jan/Feb .... just cold!
Wow... Good morning I've read it 3 times already and I'll do it once more out loud, this really speaks to me thank you so much sharing!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
You are too kind Dan the Man...........
Lorna,
An emotional read...to say the least!
Your poem along with the video gripped my heart! Itās so hard! Just yesterday I had one of those melancholy days! I couldnāt let go of what was...but, I know I have to! It hurts!
A super poem and video! Thank you for sharing! Iāll certainly refer to them when another burst of melancholy makes its appearance!
~Laura~
Hello L........ I'm sorry you are feeling down........ Yes it hurts.......... wishing you sunshine.
Thank you my friend!
Great to āseeā you!
Today turned out to be a beautiful sunshiny day! I have to say spending a few hours in Central Park helped!āļø
there certainly is an optimum time for everything, and if ya miss it the first time round, hop on board the next time its passing near.... you just nailed it my friend.... Neville
You sound refreshingly full of optimism today Neville...... thanks.
it'll pass... everything passes..... smile when ya can my friend that's what I say...... Neville
I've missed your writes over the last couple of weeks - and some write to return with.
What a nice thing to say - thanks Michael.
yep, there comes a time doesn't there.
Does this mean we can expect to see more frequent posts from you? I hope so.
Aren't you nice Dusk - lately sometimes I just go dense on what to say ... I'll try to be more consistent because it does make me feel good to share with you all.
Lately i often find i have nothing to say...... so guess what, I say noithing (poetry wise i mean)
Beautiful emotive words Lorna.
Ta Andy............
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