Tune: Doncaster
('Put thou thy trust in God')
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What tune within heart, mind
Can I use, what song find?
To praise my God, He Lord of all
Will hear me when I call
Help us here persevere
E'en when trials are severe
Holding to you, give grace we need
Still us your people feed
Renew where dim the light
Come, enliven our sight
To continue, simplicity
To know what your will be
The love within our heart
You placed there from the start
Our love to you, who loved us first
For you we hunger, thirst
- Author: orchidee ( Offline)
- Published: June 16th, 2019 01:30
- Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 6.6.8.6. metre.
- Category: Spiritual
- Views: 13
Comments4
Not sure about the last line of the first stanza unless the answer he gives when I call is no.
Thanks Gold. I tend to rhyme - 'all', 'call', 'not fall', etc. I understand what you mean.
Still counting those metres - get them wrong and it's Trub Berles.
Thanks Michael. Yep, and another Berles there.
LOL praise him all u like .... he won't hear u Orchidee.
Thanks dusk. Doh! Am I talking to me self then, all this time?!
Yep... that's why nothing happens.
There's the saying 'Surely so many millions (over the centuries) can't be wrong?'
Christians are outnumbered by other beliefs and have been for centuries. Muslim, Buddhism, Hindu.
There is a similar saying to the one you quote "Ten thousand billion flies can't be wrong ... eat shit!"
if you hum it.. I will tap my foot along with ya...
I take it this is nothing to do with electricity meters...
Thanks N. Nope, nor the 100 metres race.....
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