Poetic Dan

Keep going

Remove that mask and go with it


Each loss is a step closer to winning


A prize we all are to somebody


  • Suresh

    NO CHOICE....
    The very aspect of being born, is to live through whatever life throws at us, remembering that our actions have consequences, and as such our actions should be measured

  • Michael Edwards

    Never avoid what life throws at you, eventually it will be a golden egg..

    Nice one Dan.

  • orchidee

    I'll blame you - I'll keep on singing then. Arrgghhh , they say! lol.

  • vvnrose

    Keep on keeping on ;) encouragement is important. Thanks for sharing.

  • dusk arising

    Oi!! thats cheating! This is one you wrote a while ago.... the idea was to use your 'todays' frame of mind to write about other stuff.....
    . nice try lol

    • Poetic Dan

      After a fantastic day that really made me chuckle, thank you!

    • FineB

      Hello Poetic Dan,

      An awesome write and ever so inspiring.

      Keep writing FineB

    • Goldfinch60

      That mask can hide the wonder of you from others and the wonder of others from you. Allare wonderful.

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