Each day I wonder,
I wonder about god.
I know my god, My Spirit,
Is always with me.
It is not the god of religions,
It is the force within me,
That force that holds me,
Holds me within myself,
Within My Spirit,
My Spirit
Who has been with me
From Infinity,
And will be with me
To Eternity.
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Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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A fine write Gold. It is the person of the Holy Spirit living in hearts (and lives) of Christian believers, I believe. However great or small the flame may be, or great or small the flowing stream - both metaphors of the Holy Spirit. I would call Him (includes aspects of Her) God, though there are other gods (small g).
That Spirit is always there, it is probably the Holy Spirit but the way I am feeling about religion at the moment, especially the Christian Religion, the Spirit is the Force that I called God and has nothing to do with the Christian teachings.
My Spirit is the force that created the Big Bang and that force, My Spirit, will be there to infinity and beyond.
Well expressed Andy
Thank you Michael.
Power and moving my friend! Only we know what's inside us and words just mess it up, but yours are very clear.
My Spirit is the force that created the Big Bang and that force, My Spirit, will be there to infinity and beyond.
This I will hang on my wall my friend
Thank you Dan for your most kind words, much appreciated.
Thanks UNCLE ANDY : ANGELA here : nearly midnight in Auckland ! I guess BRIAN is in Church ! We both adore Classical Guitar and Brian plays well enough to convince My PAPA to let me be HIS WIFE ~ AMEN ALBINEZ is an awesoem Composer and JOHN WILLIAMS is one of His greatest interpreters. He is 86 and Brian met Him recently at a Concert in Essex ! His touch has still its Ancient Power ! Thanks for the POEM also ! We all have an inner Spirit that can be touched by the Hand of GOD ! The POWER of Your Inner Spirit is evidenced by you loving care of JOYCE 24/7 ! That is a great example & encouragement to each of US : AMEN. Please check our Collaboration on HELIUM which we know you will enjoy
BLESSINGS & LOVE to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
Thank you Angela. Yes John Williams is a great guitarist.
Very, Very well expressed Andy
I have had a quiet period lately and this sums up a lot of my feelings too
BRAVO YOU!
Thank you Andrew, may your feelings come to the fore in your words.
Andy
Absolutely!!! You dont have to be a victim of some man made church/religion to know there is a 'god/force/enegy/overseer/guardians/positive force' within and around us all.
Its awful to see christians claiming this is 'theirs' as if it didn't exist until they created it.
So very true d a, My Spirit has always been with me even when I was involved in Christianity. I still go to Church but I only go there to sing in the choir, if the choir breaks up, which in may do soon, that would be the end of Church for me. (The Choir is getting older and no youngsters are coming into it, there is only one person younger than me in the choir and she is sixty four!)
Agree with dusk arising. Your poem has also found me at a very particular spiritual time of my life. Enjoyed reading very much.
Thank you vv, may Your Spirit be always with you.
Really good points made in your posting today dear Andy - We are all vessels containing spirit which mysterious as this is lets us, when we are quiet, into the secret of what our true Self really is.
Thank you Fay, yes we all have that Spirit within us which is our self.
Hello Goldfinch60,
That was a beautiful and poignant write.
I am finding that as a Christian the key is having a true personal relationship with God then everything else falls into place.
Keep writing FineB
Yes that relationship must be personal, once you realise that the vagueries of religious practices and beliefs become non-entities.
Very nice poem Gold. I too like you believe in God as creation and we are creation too. We are part of the greatness of God. All that energy. Thanks for your deep writing
Thank you marijoy, we are all part of that Spirit which we call God.
When I think of God I think of Love. They may be one and the same, and if they are, then your heart is filled with enough to last for eternity. God bless you.- Phil A.
Thank yoy Phil, yes I believe you are write God and Love are totally intertwined.
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