Each time there's a moment and thoughts think it can't get better than this.
Eventually it'll fall apart, left thinking never to get back or have better happiness that's lost.
Then time takes its toll, never ever giving up on its stroll. Only having one motivation, being better out of every mistakes confession
This has got us to the point we are now, knowing from every thought of our heartbreaking, but yet here we still stand.
Life can be pretty fantastic, knowing nothing is ever broken, whatever life throws up on.
Understanding it all helps, keep creating better patterns of self
Never change who you truly feel you are but remember lookout from your heart, keep truth upon your tongue.
One day you'll grow so strong, no amount of cuts will make you fall.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is one I done earlier but looking forward to my challenge for next week. Learning to let go of my own story and just start writing what's around me.
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Great write Dan
Always appreciated good sir!
That you
You're looking forward to letting go of your own story ans writing about what is around you. That's when a good poet turns into a great poet and you sure are a good poet - keep writing.
Thank you my friend, very inspirational and I shall keep trying!
If ya don't let go.. ya never will know....
sometimes you just gotta do what yesterday you never thought was possible.............. Neville
Perfectly said! I do what I never thought possible!
good man....
Great positive write Dan, may your journey be filled with wonder.
Yes! My Spirit will never fail 😉
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