Ache

Neville

Ache

 

           She took or rather stole

                        So many things from me

                                  Although I can’t complain

                                       I now ache so very tenderly

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 23rd, 2019 11:53
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    A unique way of looking at aches love can create then leave behind
    - - and from your tender heart I can believe every line...............

    • Neville

      thank you again dear Fay.... unfortunately I was unable to format these words quite the way I wanted to ...... there was meant to be a much greater, visually exaggerated slant .. but never mind.... N x

    • kevin browne

      You can't get even with this sort of pain. Aches can heal slowly, but in sad situations you must maybe look to higher horizons. Great work though.

      • Neville

        thank you Kevin.. you are absolutely write sir....

      • orchidee

        Would I swoon if I enquired further? lol.

        • Neville

          Most probably... I would at least bring ya recliner along when you call.......... cheers O


          Neville

        • Michael Edwards

          There's beauty in this little gem of a write - nice one Neville.

          • Neville

            that was my intention.. thank you Michael .. you have an artists eye......

          • SerenWise

            Beautiful little write, encasing a lot of feeling

            • Neville

              that will do just nicely.... thank you..

              Neville

            • Goldfinch60

              Super write, those aches may always be with you.

              • Neville

                Ouch... thanks GF60.... I know what you mean, so thanks again..... Neville

              • dusk arising

                Aches which nag you and only time will heal are the weight of life's unfairness sometimes. Personally i try to shrug them off with the selfish consolation that, somewhere, someone probably felt/feels the same about me.

                Your piece is compact and powerful saying so much to, and for, those who empathise.

                • Neville

                  Many thank you's DA & truly meant.... N



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