Ache
She took or rather stole
So many things from me
Although I can’t complain
I now ache so very tenderly
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Author:
Neville (
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Ache
She took or rather stole
So many things from me
Although I can’t complain
I now ache so very tenderly
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Comments7
A unique way of looking at aches love can create then leave behind
- - and from your tender heart I can believe every line...............
thank you again dear Fay.... unfortunately I was unable to format these words quite the way I wanted to ...... there was meant to be a much greater, visually exaggerated slant .. but never mind.... N x
You can't get even with this sort of pain. Aches can heal slowly, but in sad situations you must maybe look to higher horizons. Great work though.
thank you Kevin.. you are absolutely write sir....
Would I swoon if I enquired further? lol.
Most probably... I would at least bring ya recliner along when you call.......... cheers O
Neville
There's beauty in this little gem of a write - nice one Neville.
that was my intention.. thank you Michael .. you have an artists eye......
Beautiful little write, encasing a lot of feeling
that will do just nicely.... thank you..
Neville
Super write, those aches may always be with you.
Ouch... thanks GF60.... I know what you mean, so thanks again..... Neville
Aches which nag you and only time will heal are the weight of life's unfairness sometimes. Personally i try to shrug them off with the selfish consolation that, somewhere, someone probably felt/feels the same about me.
Your piece is compact and powerful saying so much to, and for, those who empathise.
Many thank you's DA & truly meant.... N
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