UNWRAPPED.

Fay Slimm.

 

Unwrapped.

 

Happiness
was a prized poem headed
Only for You.
A red rose laid on the pillow 
of an ancient four-poster and
blankets nectared with passion.

 

Happiness
was a taste of love's juices
on virgin lips.
A first drink of champagne
between searing kisses and
hot coffee the morning after.

 

Happiness
was racing rain, skinny dips
and beach massage.
A warm bath for two at sunset,
darkly decadent chocolates and
the fun of tickle-raised laughter.

 

Happiness
now unwrapped exudes scent
of covert thrills.
A captured event adorned time
with duly undressed camera and
wove gems into memory's rapture.

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 24th, 2019 03:05
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Michael Edwards

    Just love this one - full of joyous memories - very uplifting.

    • Fay Slimm.

      So pleased you were uplifted by the read Michael.

    • orchidee

      A good write Fay.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thank you Orchi.

      • Neville

        Filled to overflowing with fond recollections many of us would be happy to share ... indeed, more than..

        Neville

        • Fay Slimm.

          Bless you - your comment warms and supports my efforts at romantic poetry - many thank yous my friend.

        • dusk arising

          Lots of loving wrote this today... it shines out. Beautiful times recounted.

          • Fay Slimm.

            You nailed it D.A. - lots of good loving makes beautiful memories. Thanks for your read and comment my friend.

          • Andrew Charles Forrest

            Beautiful Fay... Beautiful

            • Fay Slimm.

              Ah - - I sincerely hope the read brought happy memories your way too Andrew.

            • marijoy

              Your poem brought honeymoon to my memory. Beautiful and sweet. Thanks

              • Fay Slimm.

                My delight is to recall through words a reader's sweet moments dear marijoy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Happiness
                Reading poems that she writes,
                Full of passion,
                Captured from her heart and soul,
                Put into these words
                So we can dream of love.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Ah - bless you my friend - these words bring warmth to my heart -- how complimentary your comment dear Andy and thank you indeed.

                • LaurašŸŒ»

                  My Dear Fay,

                  You are the gift who keeps on giving to her readers! Unwrapping your poems IS like drinking champagne and indulging in ā€˜darkly decadent chocolatesā€™! An EXQUISITE read indeed!

                  ~Laura~

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    My humble thanks to you Laura - your comment has made my day..................

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA HERE ! Im a bit late in replying but Brian asked me to answer this because it was written from a Lady*s *Point of View* Its 8am WEDNESDAY here and Im gettiung ready for work (CLINIC @ 10am !)

                    I cried for JOY when I read it because ever since I first DANCED with BRIAN : I found True HAPPINESS and it has lasted all day & every day 24/7 eversince ! Despite the 11,500 miles distance and Me always being 12 hours ahead : our love has grown Deeper & Sweeter every day !

                    Your POEM sounds like a prelude to our HONEYMOON (Easter 2020 !) ! We will spend ONE NIGHT in Essex (in a Four Poster V 1.) And then fly to Sevilla (Spain) for our TWO weeks HONEYMOON in a 5 Star Hotel : Honeymoon Suite ! Then (V 2.) we will taste VIRGIN KISSES & Champagne & Sweet Spanish Cafe Negro with Soberano to wake us up next morning : AMEN YES we will get to the BEACH sometime and in ROMANTIC SPAIN : The Honeymoon Suites always have *A BATH made for TWO with the taps in the middle* (V 3.) and double showers : I CANT WAIT ! Now it is ANTICIPATION : Then it will be PARTICIPATION and forever MEMORYs RAPTURE ! (V 4.)

                    Your POEM is more perfect than you know !
                    Thanks for sharing : BLESSINGS & LOVE
                    Yours as always : Love ANGELA XOXOX

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      I am delighted to have roused anticipation in your lovely warm heart dear Angela - love is the all and ever will be.......... keep taking care of each other and joy will always follow your togetherness .

                      • ANGELA & BRIAN

                        Thanks for this FAY ~ BRIAN here ~ ANGELA has gone to WORK so I thought I should reply on her behalf ! I was very touched by her comment ! I asked her to res[pond because I knew the sentiments in your lovely Love Poem would touch her heart ~ and they did ! Since we first met ANGELA & I have had GREAT TOGETHERNESS ! ~ AMEN

                        Love & Peace & Joy
                        Yours as always BRIAN XOX



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