Will I ever
Blush before you
As you reach
And I rush
And I fall
Floor-wards for you
Yet will I ever
Unravel before you
As you touch
And I take
And I give
My all for you
Whisper will I ever
Taste your scent
As I ache
Deep into the distance
And you wake
In empty bed
Tell me will I ever
Tremble and shake
As you lead me
So very far
Until I wake
Inside your head
So hear me as I plead into forever
Tell me now please will I ever
Or is this just the art of pain for pleasure
Catch me as I fall into never
Bite my lip until we bleed together
And please me like your best endeavour
And afterwards
Tell me will I ever
Will I ever
Wake
And take
Your pleasure
As you
Hold me
Tight and say it’s forever
And kiss
My messy head
And whisper to my blushing brow
‘Look what you just did’
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Author:
sylviasearcher (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I have a real problem ending poems at the moment. It’s like I’m taking myself to the edge of a cliff and I’m so enthralled by the beauty of it that I don’t want to turn around but I’m too afraid to jump so I just stand there on and on and on in a moment. Oh and it’s not really 18+ is it?
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Comments8
This has to be one of your best Sylvia - a poetic gem indeed and one for my favourites.
Well it was just rattling around in my head and I thought maybe it was better to just let it out.
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am always surprised that people might enjoy my ramblings. It is such a humbling yet warm feeling 💜
Fido, me watchdog, can be a bit too keen. He might bark at the minimum hint of a poem needing to be 18+, if it's not marked up so. lol. Down, Fido, not now - no need to bark at this poem. He said you could remove the 18+ note. lol
Thanks Fido, maybe I will, maybe I won’t... does that make Fido nervous?!
Just kidding 😊
This laying bare ones frailty and superbly written. You excel here. I feel the 'need' carefully woven into your questions, the joy ready to escape at the right answers.
Into my favourites.
Thanks for appreciating the vulnerability of this piece and nurturing it into your favourites! 😊
It is a gem indeed - great write Sylvia.
Curtsies
Thank you 😊
you have indeed crafted a poem of quite exceptional beauty and laid it out here for all to examine and enjoy... the several times repeated 'for you' question works really well throughout... and the ending is quite special too......... Neville
Stop examining Neville! Lol
I appreciate the appreciation of all it has given me a little glow 😊
then we have a win win situation on our hands....
Will I ever - you already have
with these poetic words of yours.
Thank you for your kindness. I think that’s exactly what I was thinking 😊
As the others have said, this is great stuff! I loved it.
Also, I have the same problem with ending my works. It is so much easier to continue adding to the moment of inspiration, and to coherently wrap it all up in a couple of sentences can be a real challenge. You succeeded with a very nice conclusion.
Thanks for enjoying it. Endings are hard. I guess there’s a poem in that notion...
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