I sit by My River,
I look into its crystal clear water
Which mirrors the clarity,
The clarity I wish I could find,
Could find within my mind.
As I look I see flecks of dust
Passing by,
Passing as if it were my thoughts
Leaving my mind,
Leaving my life.
The more I look
Bigger pieces start flowing,
Flowing by,
Taking my concerns away,
Away from my mind,
Condemned into another place.
A large piece of the world goes passed
Taking many worries from me.
I look back into my mind
And I find that clarity of thought,
All now seemed well,
My River had cleared my thoughts.
My River and I were back,
Back with My Spirit.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Reflection
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A good write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Your lady of the Avon looks after you Goldfinch. Your guardian angel who watches over you assuring you she will always be there to guide through the misty pools of life.
She surely does d a, and yes she will always be there for me.
Long may your river flow.
Thank you Michael. It will last out my mortal life.
GOOD MORNING : UNCLE ANDY : ANGELA HERE (Its 9pm !) Thaks for the FRENCH OPERA it always lifts my Spirit. French & Italian are both excellent & Romantic Languages for Opera as is Spanish ! German (for me) always strikes a more Sombre note ! Love the sentiments in your elegant ode ! We all need a River to meditate by and share our sorrows & joys with ! Brian has a River but here I have the shore ! I often sit & watch the ebb & flow of the Tide. I feel Brian near Me but I know He wiil materialise in October *When his Boat cums in !*
Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Plase check our CARBON CYCLE : Thanks A & B !
Any type of water, when sitting next to it, can be so calming and influential in our lives.
if that's what it takes, hold on to it sir and hold it tightly... we all need a river... Neville
Thank you Neville, it will always be there for me.
Your spirit will float in that help from the flow of that river dear Andy.
It surely will Fay, Thank you.
Beautiful write Andy
Thank you Christina.
The Milky Way, the galactic river, like all rivers, flows like the river of life, and every floating particle is like a passing moment, and every moment is like a memory, that you have captured so well in your poem
Every moment in life is so very special. Thank you Suresh.
Andy,
May that River forever flow!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura, much appreciated.
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