Christina8

Quiet Love

Our love is unspoken

it needs no words or rhymes

Yet it comes to mind

and on my pen from time to time

 

It tells a quiet story

of pain healed with a touch

brown eyes disarming my own

souls fused without saying much

 

Yet it still yearns

for the passion it knows so well

It reaches for the hand to hold

Love remembers when it first fell

 

 

Comments8

  • Neville

    you have a very lucky pen... a pearl of a poem & true...

    • Christina8

      Thank you so much Neville for your kind comments!--Christina

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      ANGELA AQUI : BUENAS DIAS CHRISTINA ~ Gracias por una Poema d'Amor perfecta. It is 8:30 pm here (NZ) so I have already enjoyed a lovely Sunday of REST (form work !) and WORSHIP !
      We agree : TRUE LOVE needs no words it is a symbiosis of two hearts beating as one ! However We are pleased your Muse moved you to share the BEAUTY of the LOVE : You share with your HUSBAND : with all of us on MPS !
      A Quiet Story : Pain healed : Disarming Brown Eyes : Souls Fused ! And yet TRUE LOVE is unsatiable ! So today (when you wake up !) you will reach out to be held and your passion sated. Brian & I cant wait to be married next year BUT being 11,500 miles apart (for a Year !) deepens our LOVE day - by - day - by - day !

      Muchos Abrazos y Besos por Tu y Tuyas
      Tuyos Hermanos Angela y Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

      • Christina8

        That's beautiful! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I really appreciate everything you wrote, and am also enjoying a day of rest. I am sure that you and Brian will have many years of sated of love as we have. Love in the spirit---Christina

      • Joker Wood

        Just by looking at the poem (without reading it), I already felt like crying.

        • Christina8

          Thank you! I hope that you did like the poem after you read it!!--Christina

        • Fay Slimm.

          Quiet love is the best dear friend and you pen it here so very well.

          • Christina8

            Thank you so much Fay, I so much appreciate it!--Christina

          • orchidee

            Gracias, and all that stuff too! I dunno what it all means. lol. A fine write Christina.

            • Christina8

              Thanks orchi! Appreciated!! Christina

            • orchidee

              And re Joker: Yep, I know - People do the same when I say 'I'm about to sing!' heehee.

            • Michael Edwards

              A touching if somewhat enigmatic write - nice one Christina.

              • Christina8

                Thank you so much Michael! Much appreciated---Christina

              • Goldfinch60

                That love needs no words but we always write about it.

                • Christina8

                  Indeed. Thanks for the kind review!!--Christina



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