Vanity is gone

Poetic Dan

Yesterday I spoke to my dark and light, it said we could end all of our plight.

 

We've made it here and see no more fear, life is precious holding it dear

 

We've lost our vanity and it feels great, all we need is a smile on our face

 

There maybe part of our nose now missing, but deep inside we have healed the spilling

 

When we never again have to justify ourselves, all that we have around is filled with love

 

The negative is about and it will never leave, but now all together we rise above with our positivity

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 17th, 2019 12:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: Life is really busy at the moment but always find time to write and reflect. I may need a holiday to catch up on others inspirational work.
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  • kevin browne

    And stuck to positivity you have dealt with over the last plenty of months now. Keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will take you up or down or wherever you want to. Self-preservastion is no dout the healing of ones own ability and for your placement on this planet. Inspiring you are indeed.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend I read this the moment it was posted and it filled me with pride, today is another wobble but I'm sitting again with your reflection to find my own.

      Truly and deeply grateful

      • kevin browne

        A mindful effort against adversity is comparable to a broken heart and for these reasons, a balance is gained through your own reflection. To deny defeat as a winner will win you the day I'm sure. Remember a reflection reflects in many directions which opens up a whole new grandiose of worlds to vision in on. Keep creating from those visions and some intellect will form with concrete foundations. The one your're standing on right now.

        • Poetic Dan

          Outstandingly said my friend and although I didn't see this until now, I can see how it helped and through those many directions I found the foundation that has never left. Thank you for the validation.

          Always appreciated
          With peace and respect
          I hope your are well my friend?

          • kevin browne

            I pressed the ignore by accident while I was just about message you. I've sent a friend request so you'll have to accept me okay.

          • Andrew Charles Forrest

            Great message Dan... keep strong love the emerson quote

            • Poetic Dan

              Yes I did enjoy finding that one and always appreciate the visit my friend.

            • Michael Edwards

              Great thoughts well expressed.

              • Poetic Dan

                Just got to keep them close to my chest, to not forget.

                Always appreciated
                Much peace and respect

              • Goldfinch60

                May that smile never leave your face and your positivity be forever with you, as I am sure it will be.
                Great words Dan

                • Poetic Dan

                  Always easier to write than do but we have to start somewhere.

                  Always appreciated my friend



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