A slamming car door
Crunching tyres on dry pebbles
Alone hereafter.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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A slamming car door
Crunching tyres on dry pebbles
Alone hereafter.
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A fine write and pic M. Is that Slammy (Sammy) Berles? Them Berles get in everywhere!
Dripe Berles - dry pebbles ? - no? - aw forget it.
Very telling write Michael.
Is it the driver or the person left behind who is alone thereafter? thanks Andy.
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ You have highlighted one of the 100 disadvantages of the AUTOMOBILE ! My (BRIAN) Sisters Husband did just that ! One night @ about 9pm he just ~ got up ~ got in his car ~ slammed the door ~ drove off and she never saw him again ! C*est la Vie ! Love the FLOWERS
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Sorry to hear that - flowers in the garden .
OH!
Oh Dear!
OH DEAR MICHAEL!
Neighbours???
Thankfully not us - cheers Andrew.
Still unable to comprehend, having visited the sites. Explain it to me, the connection between the first two lines and the third.
Is it that someone left, screeching tires, thus being left alone?
The third line is the consequence of the first two. Thus car door slams and car departs leaving someone behind all alone.
Or if you like in this particular case car door slams, car departs and at last someone has escaped and is now on their own driving away. It's up to interpretation of the reader.
Hi Michael,
Thank you for this poem.
Lovely.
Keep writing FineB
And a big thank you for all your kind comments against my latest paintings. So very much appreciated.
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